The Chunin Exam plot when meeting Orochimaru was written on purpose. What does it mean that Gacha gets a Negative Taunt effect so that Orochimaru targets him? The reason is beyond logic as if intentionally pressuring the MC plus where is the 5th gate of Taijutsu that is usually used? Why is it not used? If it is used, wouldn't it be able to avoid being bitten by poison Snake (Orochimaru)? Luckily when he was bitten it was only poison, not a curse like what happened to Sasuke.
Whether it's Leveling up or writing the plot is very slow.. Bad skill writing as if MC has no definite goal or direction in skill development, in the middle of the story MC gets cosmos skill, unfortunately the execution the story is bad.
The thing I don't really like is the Harem genre, it's always like this.. whenever there is a fanfiction combining anime written in one story there is always a Harem genre.
What I like about this Novel is having other anime characters written in one story, the other world system or Traveler also makes the plot more interesting. If only there was no Harem genre I would give this story 5 stars.
It's very rare to find a Tensura fanfiction novel..
A Little Spoiler:
-Rimuru is too dependent on MC
-Ririmuru IQ decreases even after having the Great Sage. Rimuru always asks the MC first as if this was written so that the MC could be seen as knowledgeable or show off his intelligence.
-Unlike the novel or anime story, Rimuru's Great Sage Skill has a little emotion, for those who have read the novel or watched the anime, they are confused because at this stage the Great Sage should be .. Can only answer systematically without emotion like complaining "Did I choose the wrong person?" This kind of emotion should appear when it evolves into Rafael's Skill.
-So far in Chapter 82 there are no problems with the plot other than it being too slow. The story is pretty good to read.
-MC OP that matches my reading presence.
-MC is also smart and tends to think first, unlike Rimuru, who seems to be deliberately a little stupid with the reason "Rimuru falls in love with MC" or "when someone falls in love IQ It will come down unexpectedly, here it doesn't mean that Rimuru is stupid, it's just that his way of thinking is immature.
- In Chapter #279, the MC transforms into a very beautiful woman. The MC has the ability to change gender like Guy Crimson.
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MC has low intelligence, is often deceived, the important point is that MC's character is very ordinary, you can find it anywhere... he calls himself a Demigod or God but has no authority , some organizations often oppress him taking advantage of his ignorance or still a beginner. And most importantly I don't really like Harem. Even so, this book is not too bad. There are a lot of different mysteries and power systems in this book, it seems like anything could be written but for me this is what is interesting. Gradually MC also becomes OP