Oct 1, 2024 : I beg of people to read further than 9 or 10 chapters before deciding he's naive and stupid, there's a reason the tag is evil protagonist

The author does not makes up new things, as a previous reviewer commented, almost all information given is traceable, with maybe a few details that JK left open filled. The only thing made up is the mc supposition of how modern magic originated and mc's innovative training and reasoning, but even then the *nature* of magic itself is spot on with JK's vision, from what I've seen. If you expect a fanfiction to keep all the plot of the original and not add anything new then you're in the wrong place friend.

it really doesn't deserve so much 1 stars, but i must admit it is a cheap copy of Swallowed Star so -1 star. It's good plot even then, but the system makes the act of cultivation tasteless and almost absent, as he only needs to kill a few enemies to he ranks up. Comprehension is also tasteless as it seems that it only gives a few special effects to attacks, and no other application, -1 star.