The author does not makes up new things, as a previous reviewer commented, almost all information given is traceable, with maybe a few details that JK left open filled. The only thing made up is the mc supposition of how modern magic originated and mc's innovative training and reasoning, but even then the *nature* of magic itself is spot on with JK's vision, from what I've seen. If you expect a fanfiction to keep all the plot of the original and not add anything new then you're in the wrong place friend.

it really doesn't deserve so much 1 stars, but i must admit it is a cheap copy of Swallowed Star so -1 star. It's good plot even then, but the system makes the act of cultivation tasteless and almost absent, as he only needs to kill a few enemies to he ranks up. Comprehension is also tasteless as it seems that it only gives a few special effects to attacks, and no other application, -1 star.

Just finished the novel after a pause. The story is good, op mc, never nerfed and boosted once more only once never more. Very fast faced cultivation compared to the rhythm of the plot, taking time skips as much as IET, as such there were very few instances of dragging the novel with fillers, it's almost a biography of an all powerful legend sang in an ancient pub by a bard. There were only a few times, usually at the end of a saga, where it feels the author was dragging the story compared to previous pacing. The secondary characters had a very standard personality, almost copy and paste, only changing the name, with the exception of a female character introduced much deep in the story, and some villains who were, admittedly by the author in his own story, senselessly evil. Most likely than not most appeared as background characters without much deepening. The cultivation is standard up to the immortal realm where its introduced the concept of law and the "heaven-defying comprehension" of the protagonist really kicks in, and further on the cultivation becomes increasingly time consuming, without secret elixirs to cultivate, making the standard breakthrough in 1 year when others take 1 billion years common in the xianxia genre impossible. The ending was rushed, as if the author regretted the decision to introduce a final world, directly taking the mc to the final realm of cultivation as soon as he sets foot there and then nothing further.

It's interesting at first, ultimate talent, hidden identity, and all that, but starting from world master his hidden identity as the human super genius start to become the full focus of the story, showcasing various instances of fillers to the story that at a second view don't add anything to the story in general (knowing that it's merely a fan-fic). I had hoped that at some point his clone merges back to him, but i grew tired of reading fillers. And apparently the story only goes to the eternal true god, stopping exactly where swallowed stars stopped, even tho the story has much more potential than that with the unexplored continent of origin and even the bigger chaotic origin dimension as shown in lord xue ying, making it so that it doesn't show more than swallowed star does, whats the meaning of reading it then? nostalgia only i guess.