Why would you nerf your already OP fanfic MC in such a contrived way? lmao

Not really a fan of invasions or apocalypses type plot but the main reasons I give a 2/5 are that the "system" is weirdly done, only does 1 thing that didn't really need to be made into a system and it's often forgotten to be used in the plot, and then there's the issue with the realms and power levels being poorly explained, apart from that everything else is pretty mid tbh

The Luna bs made me drop this, why tf would anyone write something like that? Making a little girl suffer manipulating her mother's death? Really man? If MC didn't want Luna around him he could've easily avoided her in a million different ways other than this weird bs, tf is actually wrong with author, literally psychopathic

It's a cruel world where the strong trample on the weak but somehow every single other weak person lives normally and only in MCs case is everyone, no matter weak or strong, immediately against MC and even if it doesn't make sense, doesn't give any advantages and is even illogical to go against a martial arts genius every single person is out to get him Yeah, that for sure somehow makes sense, yup

From the amount of reviews I thought the reviews were bot bombed and smelled foul play but surprisingly it seems not, the fanfic is actually fire, you can feel the genuine care for LOTR from author and the harry potter sign-in surprisingly fits right in with the story

Shit is so lame, if you want to write fanfic about someone disrupting the story this badly then do it properly, MC is weak asf and is controlled and manipulated time and time again, this fanfic would be 100 times more satisfying if he directly killed the buddhists, hongjun and every single character that wanted to manipulate him

How does being tired of farming XP in a videogame equate to being tired of experiencing real life combat, magic and all the other professions? Doesn't really make sense but at least it would be tolerable if it wasn't because author decided to incorporate the lame cliche of mc having no common sense, one example is MC sees 3 people dying while fighting a wivern and at first decides not to intervene because "they could get mad if I(MC) steal the kill", like, he KNOWS it's real life and not a videogame and that they are literally in the brink of death, in what universe is what he's thinking making sense in that situation? He's supposed to come from a normal universe so how is he thinking something so nonsensical? 0/5 some authors really write without putting at least 1 braincell to work