its ok for the most part the only thing I don't like is the mc only know about the first movie and little tidbits here and there and tbh when read transmigration facfics i want the mc to know almost everything. I also don't like Hermione and the mc's attitude towards her idk why cn authors always do the 'why would i stay with 3 little brats when i can have a little lolita with me'. the family dynamic is pretty cute but sometimes the author gets carried away and makes entire chapters mostly slice of life and Im not really into that but its not that bad and doesn't impact the story that much. edit: I'm dropping my rating from 4 stars to 3 because of how annoying Hermionie gets the further I go into the story.

its ok but the mc cares too much about shit he shouldn't care about as a person who was an adult in his previous life and some parts of his 'emotions' are dragged out too much. especially stupid reactions when he knows the plot but is still shocked and he's not even acting. "Even if it is expected. But the moment I actually heard it from Kabuto Yakushi. Menma still couldn't restrain the shock in his heart, and his pupils suddenly shrank subconsciously. "What did you say? Destroy Konoha?" " like what tf is this bs, and finally idk how to say this but the way the mc has conversations with orochimaru is a bit weird and too lengthy for what they are talking about. like whats this supposed to mean ""I hereby accept Orochimaru-san's good wishes." Menma said with raised eyebrows. Soon after. Orochimaru also took Yakushi Kabuto and turned around and left. Looking at Orochimaru's back as he left. Menma's pupils also showed a faint color." the conversations a way to overacted and some of the reactions are really unnecessary.

this is one of those novels where the mc says 'looking for death' I feel like thats all you need to know for this novel.

I haven't read that far yet but i see stupid shit like kushina getting attacked by the shimura clan and not the attack like beat but the out of her but like try and kill her and then the mc comes in and saves her, this is so stupid purely because of the fact the kushina is chosen to be a jinchuriki so she probably has anbu protecting her and that makes this plot so stupid

The mc is stupid. he acts like an actual kid all the time even though its his second life and im not saying hiding his abilities is stupid the everything else he does just seems stupid. also the way the story is written makes it very annoying to me personally.

the person who rated this fic 1 star for the mc being hufflepuff is just being a stupid hater for no reason. but other than that this is an infinite novel so if you arent into that this fic isnt for you. the fic goes pretty well for the first 20 chapters where the mc is speedrunning his first 2 years at hogwarts until harry enters school. in these he learns alchemy and come in contact with the muggle government and uses their resources which is something i personally like and for some reason not many fics do this but this one does. Im rating this fic 3 stars simply cause of the first 20 chapters and i will not be reading more than that because this is a infinite fic.

I honestly dont see the point of Harry becoming a girl