dude kinda a creep like it's ok for him to like tonks, bellatrix and narcissa but other than that its weird how he interacts with hermione and cho chang like a fucking pedo. he seems insanely perverted saying shit like once he becomes the principle he will make a rule that any witch that enters his office will have to be without underwear like wtf is wrong with you they are literally all under 18 and much younger than you.

Its trying too hard to be a comedy and failing miserably in execution. The lord leine stuff got way too idiotic for me maybe its funnier in chinese. all the mc's interactions with other characters are just bad and most of the characters don't even act like they do in the movies, just his interaction with voldemort is just stupid. Also from the looks of it the story goes off the rails pretty fast seeing that the ending is just literal nonsense.

It gets worser the more I read it. The idea of itself is ok and the system is good and the mc is not overpowered with a reality engine or something like that in the first few chaps which is good the following plot is bad in my opinion currently there are 75 chaps and only at the end does the mc actually start doing something with his tech and business maybe this has potential later but rn its 1 star for me.

It was good until mew came in and while it first it was ok later on it started to steal food from the mc's pokemon and when he tried to stop it mew just beat him up and I don't really like plots like that like comedy is fine but thats taking shit too far, but other than that it also started to get a bit boring the first 80 chaps I'd give 4 stars but it gets downgraded to 2 after that. Him leaving professor Oak is kinda the drop off point of this novel.

The mc is too bland and doesn't really do anything in the later part all the girls are like "omg he's so handsome, why am I feeling like this" etc kinda ruins all the original characters. dude has like the most op genjutsu but is still like I'm not powerful enough when he could probably put all of danzo and his roots in a genjutsu

The fact she was hit with an imperius curse and couldn't do anything about it until the very last moment is kinda enough for me to not like this fic no one likes being controlled so idk why the author thought controlling the mc via imperius curse was a good idea. The fight with the troll was ridiculous with her sacrificing her blood and bones with in battle and to get strength she probably could have gotten before but she had to keep it for the "last moment". the worst part is murtle knew she was under imperius and she does nothing and just talks to her and when she does go to inform someone she doesn't inform any of the professors.