Great, I like it, but a couple things bothered me. The MC’s lack of knowledge leads to too many chapters full of explanation, feels like the author is constantly infodumping. Also, the MC’s obsession with making his grandma immortal is weird. I get that she’s his only family, but she’s not ill, not dying, and already super healthy beacuse she drank Spring of Youth water. It’s only been two months since he awakened, so him rushing this things is weird to read.

It was good but also tiring to read... The amount of bullshit that the MC recieved just by existing are ridiculous. Every single character beside a few good one just hate him. Pure trash. No brain. And Annoying. I'm fine with the mc giving up but when you get bullshit smeared all over your face I need you to retaliate, do something. Stop just passively receiving shit. I need him to be a little bit proactive in using the system in some ways. I was wishing for the MC just to be done with it and become true evil and destroy it all. Also I need this MC to stop complaining. I know that the higher his luck the more chance he gets targeted, but he also gets rewarded by the system. He's complaining to much while still being dependent on those rewards.

It really hard to read. The Protagonist logic and thinking are so stupid it's unbearable, reading the first dream simulation is just frustrating. Seing him treating a person that bad like an asshole pissed me off. I know the girl act like a bitch and he only think it was a "game", but I just can't fathom the logic of instantly thinking they were just an npc and blackmailing(threaten) them into sex when the dream was so realistic that it's no different than reality. It's like he instanly lose his humanity in the first couple of hour being in the dream. I'll read more and change the review if it got better. But for now the protagonist is thinking with his lower half alot.

It's good. I just don't like the Protagonist. He's not cautious, plays to much with his enemy, he is an arrogant character.

The story is a bit slow. Besides that I like it overall, the characters are nice, not to much of those young master and arrogant npc. I don't know why a bunch of people hating on the female lead, she is not annoying, not a burden either, she's barely even relevant at the to the story lol. even until the end she doesn't play any role. About the Protagonist hiding his strength. It's not bad. He still shows that he is a genius, he doesn't hide all of his strength. He doesn't even hide his strength much later on. The latter part of the novel sucks. Too much filler, go the point of stalling. I hate that we waste time on some useless tournmanet when the MC is already at Nascent Soul! His enemy is at Building Foundation and the strongest is still at Golden Core. And yet this shit took so much chapter. The latter part was rushing to much near the end. The ending was bad, like super bad, the MC just ascend then killed the final boss, the end. Those key character introduced? Not used. The Immortal zombie body, forgotten Phoenix tribulation, heavenly destiny luck? Doesn't play any role. Heavenly palace above luo city? Forgotten. The missing Immortal Aliance Council member that master the dao of time? Never explained. The 5 reincarnated Immortals that got revealed? Doesn't get used anywhere. Everything went downhill since we get to Nascent Soul or maybe as early as Golden Core. Author lose interest, and then gave up. I honestly don't want to see any other works from this author, he is just not invested in his story. You'll see alot of his Notes in this novel of him being distracted by stuff like watching pro League of Legend match or playing games to the point of not writing the stories. Overall good. It could be better. Got ruined by the end. I hate how there is so much filler in the chapter. So honestly it's around 2-3 stars.

Idk if it just me but I don't understand anything that's happening in this story... Even though I requested this. It's just so bad that even if I re-read the chapter multiple times I'm still confused. Maybe it's because of my lack of sleep but I'll try re-reading it again later.

Not bad, I kinda like it. AI is struggling a bit with the names on this one. I have to add so many term on the term replacer just for the MC's name alone lol. Also warning: There is many cringe moment in this. It just the way fanfiction romance goes, most of them is full of cringe. After 100 chapter it started to get good, but at around chapter 180ish the author decided to make the main character aged by 5 years by some side effects, instantly making him 18 years old... It feels super weird to read...

On The first chapter at the first paragraph Japan already got destroyed. The rest of it is just a hate fuel for japan. This author is dogshit.

Stopped reading at the twilight vampire stuff. It becomes annoying to read because the relationship between character feels weird. Romance sucks, heroine just randomly appear. MC feels like a dead fish. Also there is racism, even when the MC and the character always says they are not racist. Author even tries to justify it sometimes. I want to rate it as a 2.5/5 because it's kinda okay. But for the reason above I jave to make it so that this novel overall rating is not 4/5.

The power system in the story is good. People could create, strengthen, and combine cards. The MC cheat ability is okay it just made it easier to enhance cards so it's not that that OP. His cheat is also limited in a way that it cost time and resource(using other cards). the pacing of the story is okay at the begining. It gives time for the power growth of the MC, the relationship with other character, the conflict and battle. The early battle is very fun to read because each person has multiple cards with different effect that could affect each other. I like that the card battle doesn't end up with spamming the same thing over and over again. Also in most of the fight are hard fought battle for the MC. Almost every good Card master he encounters later on is so hard to kill it's ridiculous. Card Master that has mutation like Effect master, analyst, magician, Fate Master, has kinda broken passive that made them hard to fight against not to mention this kind of card master has many life saving/broken cards. I really like The card system. One thing to mention is that the spell card in the story is not consumable it just has cooldown for each uses. Character could also build different decks to fight: Beast deck(beast card summon), Warlock deck(mostly spellcard), etc. The chapter are long, most of them are 2-3 chapter merged into one chapter. This novel combine some aspect from yugioh and pokemon that I really enjoy. So I would recomend you to try reading it! Update: it got boring near the end. The fight becomes a hasle to read because almost every key enemy is just too hard to kill... They could either escape, immune, regen, invalidate your skill, etc. The plot starting to get bad when he gets to platinum and becomes tiring to read when he gets to diamond.