Reading this novel I rather not be a confusous. I rather rely on fate and karma stuff. It totally restraint people from doing thing. People want to kill you, but you can only defend but not fight back too hard to avoid killing them. One thing for real, people when they think they had power over you and see you won't kill them, what would they do? They would push the issue to no end until they gain something from you, or until you eventually had to kill them. The process will be long, more than 10 chapters or more just for that. It would simply easier to show your might, mess with me at least you will lost something dealy if not your life. This way, people with bad heart will stay clear and you will have easier life. Wouldn't it? Why complicate simple matter to this point? Just for the sake of confusionous or Tao sh*t? Nah, this novel not for me. Make easy thing so damn complicate out of proportion. Bye bye.

I almost can't tell the different between having a system and not having one. The only, and I mean only, key advantage for having a system is MC and gain proficiency of martial art just by watching the video. The rest, its all MC's hard work, even people without system would gain similary. Oh, another thing(but I don't consider advantage) is having a system telling you that you complete a certain exercise sets, but no gain in strength or power, so it completely useless, just having someone remind you something. Thus, overall, the system is a total trash. In fact, I as the reader don't see the need for having this trash system. Since everything can gain through hard work and grinding, similar to everyone else, what is the use of having the system then? Just to have someone talking to you? Reminding you? Nah, I don't need that. When novel advertised as a system type novel, everyone would think this come with some cheats. But this system only cheats is watching martail art video to gain some insignificant amount of experiences. Other than that, all hard work and grinding just like anyone else. totally deceptive. Cheats often associated with rapid growith in power or something. But you won't see that here that is for sure. Bye bye

After read a while like 99 chapters, its gets boring. Don't know why, just boring. I will stop here.

Concept of system reward is not clear. Most of the time, system didn't help with cultivation level. Give new method and so on, but not clear. His student level not relate to the reward by the system. And many more. I almost like, system is all over the places. Make it a bit wierd and hard to aware what is going on. Not so good. But not the worst, there are many novels that were a lot worse.

from the 1st chapter to 3rd chapter, MC do a lot of useless thinking. He even think about how beautiful this perons/that person is. And think a lot more, I will do this, I won't do that. Who you think you are, I won't follow the plot and so on. All these useless thinking did not help MC's position, power, and standing in the sect one bit. Torally trash through and through. Yet, system aleady activate in the first chapter, and it still did not do sh*t. It did not give MC task, choice in order to get reward and increase MC's situation at all. What a trash system and what a trash MC. I start to skip lines to see when MC can at least gaining something. Skip to chapter 5 and still don't see system show up once after the initial activation. Just a lot of useless thinking, dream and so on. What a trash MC(I mean completely trash) he did not think about why system still did not give him task or choice yet. But keep thinking of other thing that won't help his current situation at all. Then there is a trash system, activated, then gone quiet because the novel must leave room for MC to do those stupid useless thinking. So trash MC and trash system which equal to trash novel. If I can give a negative 10 review, I would'be done so. That is how much trash this novel really is. bye bye.

beginning MC got two rewards. One is the flame thing, the other was his level plus one I think. Ok the level increase should be auto stuff. But the flame thing, he got it and he didn't use it? I read for a while still don't see him using it. doing this doing that, thinking of this thinking of that, but still did not see him using it. I lost my pateient and start skipping to see the point MC using his reward. Chapter 5, still don't see it. Is MC take life as a joke? He is just beginning, still weak, and still need to all the advantage the system can give him especially at the weak beginning stage. Yet he still did not fully use what system gave him. Is he a fool? Or rather is the writer of this novel a fool? got thing but don't use, almost like a person was given wealth but he still choose to pick up garbage to eat to survive instead of using his wealth to buy thing to improve his situation. What a stupid fool.

You know, in some novel, when MC is fighting someone and then someone try to sneak attack or someone appear to have overpower against MC. There will be a side character that will shout to MC to be carefull. Most of the time, they did not aware that MC is a lot stronger than they think. Those side characters could be a friend, GF, some random people and so on. Whatever the case, then this kind of thing happen, I hated it. It distract MC, it distract the reader(Me), it create the scene where sometime MC must stop and explain he is stronger than they think. This annoy the hell out of me. But in this novel, MC himself is the one the doing this annoying routine. Times and again, he keep reminding his spirit pet to be careful. Look at this for second. She had hinted that she much older than she looks, much stronger and much more experience. Moreover, she is an S rank summon which is much much stronger, and had much more experiences in fighting than the current MC. Even with the system, MC still a lot weaker and less experience than her. Thus, it is not MC place to keep reminding her of danger. Annoying the hell out of me. Instead, he should focus on system that failed him. System detect dangers many time, but fail to detect a group of eveil people that follow him. He should be thinking how the system fail him and correct this loop hole and completely trust the fighting to his spirit pet. When he keep reminding his spirit pet, its annoy the hell out of me(I mean if he is stronger than her is one thing, if he had more experience than her also one thing, but obvously not). MC should shut the F up and focus on something more usefal.

One of those novel with a peice of sh*t system. System only help his level up once, after that it simeply require MC's own efforts to gain power. He had to spend 3 years to comprehand dao on this own. Then he had to cultivate human body on his own and his level only increase by 2 while everybody else move far ahead. A classic the lower level beat the stronger level, underdog sh*t. So damn boring to see it, so routine that I've seen it more than hundreds upon hundreds of Chinese novel. This one worst, already only 2-3 chapters in the storyline of this novel already show sign of pushing toward underdog stuff.m Extreme poison is coming my way if I continue to read this sh*t. Bye bye. Nope same old boring routine. system basically can't do sh*t. No need, system is just for show and nothing more. No extra skills, no potions, no equiptment. Hell I even suspect if MC reach level 20(if he ever get there given the super slow progress system), he might need to spend another 3 years or more to comprehend something new before gaining another power. What is the different between having a system and not having one?

Novel sucks, system sucks, and MC sucks. MC keep thinking about useless things under the criticle situation. For example he think of how strong was his wife in the situation that he is still a weak chicken. Thinking about that would help the situation? Obvously not. Instead of focus how to use the system to increase his strength right away, he still have time to think about useless things. He did this stupid thinking many many times, it so damn annoying. Then the system with all the power MC accumulate he can't advance without cultivation technique. What a piece of sh*t system. MC then first have to get the cultivation technique, then use more point to upgrade the damn thing to satify the level requirement. Wow what a piece of sh*t system. When MC at first level, he can advance to the next level right away with all those Qi thing and without the need of cultivation technique. Yet, after that to increase his level, he now require it? That bring to the point of this novel sucks. Having system with major limitation, make system sucks which in turn make this novel suck. And what about his wife. This thing came out of nowhere. It was so damn easy. Then his wife was strong at the age of 19. Ok. Then when MC improve his strength, the novel said compare to other people MC is a genous. Well, the novel forget his wife. Even at that point, MC still a weak chicken compare to his wife. Yet novel had the audastity to say MC is the best genous. Overall, this novel does not sound right. The writer obvously not thinking thing through while writing it. Create many annoying point and that girl came out of nowhere become MC wife. I still can't figure out why it so damn easy, everything was made for MC to have good sex. The girl also don't think much about the situation. totally weird. Bye bye. I sense extremely poison if I continue to read it.

Serously? This novel really forcus hard on MC leeching on the girl. Yes, the girl actively give things to MC. But 8 chapters in and this novel still keep on making MC leeching the girl. That dragon didn't help either, creating more leeching scence. I remember system did give out rewards. Experience and some other thing don't remember. Those thing mean sh*t to the current situation? Can't improve MC grade? What's up with the novel keep focus on the leeching stuff? Trying to make MC totally piece of sh*t and got look down upon? Then make a come back or something? I already feel this novel a bid off, have a potential of being extremely poisonous. Bye bye, to save my sanity from reading poison stuff.