I seldom give a bad rate for a novel ... But this one is too unbearing 🗿🗿🗿 Idk what kind of fvcking bullsh1t about the author of this novel, he give the protagonist for having an "immortal treasure" But he just uses it in the early chapters then he abandoned that treasure ... He gives his forth child a heaven-defying fate is like making blood pact with amazing yao beast but that author just abandoned all of that ... Let his forth child be a mortal ... So fvcking sh11t !!! ... You author ... Just too focuss for the protagonist eldest child ... Fvckk !!!!

Idk what kind of bulls1ttt about immortal in this novel 🗿 ... Is there a righteousness immortal here ? Why all immortal in this novel so fvcking villain ? Even though the storyline of this novel is so good and its world building is good ... But if the author always put immortal imagines as villain always .... It will break the good storyline of this novel

It's still hard to understand in some point ... And its world building is to chaotic ...

Good