I read up to 80 chapters and it is very good, not only one of the best fan novels for Lord of Mysteries, but one of the best fan novels in general. It does not contain stretching and does not make everyone love the hero. I hope that you continue like this. If I say there is one flaw, it is that its chapters are currently few haha.This is my first time giving a 5-star rating to a fan art novel .and I hope I don't regret this in future chapters.
It's a good idea and I liked it, but the problem is that the writer wants to gather all the stories in one place, and I feel it's illogical. If, for example, the hero didn't finish in one world and went to another, it would be better than gathering them and sharing them, but it's good, despite that.
I do not recommend it very much, even though it is a good story, but the writer did not exploit it well. He made the hero appear as if he is God who does not make mistakes. For God’s sake, how did he come to know what anyone he talks to is thinking? Where did the prestige of Adam, amon and the fool go?
A good novel as a start, but the writer is a beginner and does not care about the details. How did he just start using the things of the elden ring without reason or news? Once he started using it, he also does not remember the days. Sometimes the Tarot Club literally has one day left, but the hero goes on a trip in which there are 5 days, and the writer skips the days and forgets the Tarot Club. Also, the most important thing is why did the girls in the novel suddenly become stupid and attached to love? The hero only breathes and they blush.