hats off to the author for writing such a creative and imaginative novel. I personally find it highly respectable for author to have written such a beautiful novel. I found a new perspective of knowledge, and find the universe inspiring to have the possibility of such knowledge.
Personally, and respectfully, although the novel is progressing at a good rate( story-wise and character-wise), I find it limited by imagination. Other than that, I find the mc becoming more and more non-emotional and, kind of, un-likable. he lost the respect for life, etc. I mean, with his ability, that is guaranteed, but the origin life planet he visited was destroyed, and after returning there, he did not use his knowledge and power to 'heal' it. given that it was mentioned he had that ability, I find it irresponsible of him for not having the shame of destroying a life-planet and not making it habitable.
Anyways, other than that, I really respect this novel, for its profoundness. Thank you for writing this. Hats off.
I agree with Aerilo. Concept is good, execution is terrible. I mean, he does all idiotic things, leaves everything to his subordinates. Like, he invests in someone, orders him to kill the protagonist of that world because the author can't think of any other ways to gain money? Etc. he can't think of anything smart, just goes through the world roughly and that's it.
this, I dont know what is so special about this? I mean, the only thing others feel from MC 's creations are aura. there is no other adjective other than aura. Like, even a simple kitchen knife is basically described as a thing made by gods, too powerful etc. they did not say anything like what amazing sharpness, or it cuts the world, or something like that. they only felt it was powerful, and thats it. ??
in the novel, the only people alive are MC and the one he orders around. the other people only act on plot. they dont have brains and are led around by the simplest actions of mc. however, the plot itself is good enough.
ngl this novel was quite good at the beginning and at the middle. but same things kept happening, and no new plots were added after the middle. of course its the stage where the power level is at the top, and newborns in the family have no value, but that was the specialty of this novel, the family and its bonding. not the fights and the plot. anyways, it became traditional and predictable in the end.
its not that good of a novel tbh. the power systems are weird, the fights are deliberately made so mysterious when they are simple. however, the plot is good, and the story is quite enjoyable. I quite enjoyed the interactions, but the plot is all like basic bricks. this can get to better read by writing slow and more patiently.
it is trash. I like the MC personality. it is mature and calm. but really, the novel really creates enemies like never before. every random point can create a life and death enemy with a seriously random big force. MC really likes low key, he tells everyone he is low key, but the world literally revolves around him. author powers up MC only for the future fights. not for/ by himself. its like every time an opponent comes, then mc becomes stronger.
Its like, I like the MC but really really hate the author. I dont know if it makes sense. but the story had potential. then everyone fights MC and it quickly became boring.
well, I agree with Dark Fairy about the story. its basically a kingdom building plot filled with female characters. in the palace, MC is the only male. well, but he is not frolicking with everyone, most of the plot is kingdom building. I mean, the story is filled with female characters, basically the harem, but he is not engaging with most of them.
Anyways this novel is still one of the best novel I have seen in this website. many novels have their quality decrease by the middle, or there are boring plots, but this one is still enjoyable and relaxing till now. Although there are some repetitive points, the plot still continues.
However, the only thing I gotta complain is that MC works very hard towards growth. like, he undergoes an evolution for the turtle, but immediately thinks about the next one. I understand ambition, but MC's character is monotonous, without character growth. also, why the hell does he still steal stuff when he has overwhelming amount of those things present in his backyard.
Also, there are more chapters after that, but its not updated here
Edit:
I have read the whole version I found, which was 3136 chapters, and I have to say that this is one of the best novel I have ever read, and I have read a lot. I want to praise the author for his, 1), consistency. 2) make it lasting. 3) even if it is a short story, incorporate into the full version. this is done easily since the genre is kingdom building.
then, the author managed to create something like a legendary novel, a classical. If it is translated properly and well, if it could have become more popular in terms of people's interest genre, then you will find it could have reached the top heights.
then the faults, I have to say that the author makes the MC run around in a hurry every time. it is acceptable for making challenges, or making interesting events form tension, etc. but the thing is mc will be the only one who will be powerful in this way. hope the author settles and just makes the timeline longer.
too much fascism. mc is murderous and childish. although the novel is quite realistic, it becomes quite unlikable due to mc character. However, ignoring all these, the plot and development is satisfactory.
I read a comment(review) on novel updates about this novel by selveron and it describes it best.