Interesting concept poor execution
Just about the only good things in this novel are the slice of life aspect in the Harry Potter world, the interactions between Bruce and katum, and the worlds katum takes Bruce to everything else is very shake to bad.
The pacing of this novel is terrible it would be ok if it only extended to the jumped worlds but it doesn’t in hp the story feels just as rushed and all over the place at times like I’m still waiting for Bruce to learn transformation magic and to master all the shit dumbledore was teaching him but instead there is always some ridiculous event taking place it was Jason Todd then the witch and now the flash which has pushed the novel into wat seems to be a climax bc he had to pause the hp world.
These events are either very short, Jason Todd, or long and super convoluted, flash. honestly the flash arc is the reason y I don’t like time being introduced to novels bc on top of this being rushed, which u can tell be the author changing the gathering time for the wolf feast to anytime instead of 1 month, you aren’t able to properly follow what going on. Honestly it would take way to long to try and deconstruct why I don’t like the flash arc so imma leave it
My biggest gripe is the lack on opportunities Bruce and Katum have to demonstrate their strength a lot of the time it’s just them playing detective and even when they go to other worlds the pacing is so fast they are almost immediately forced into the big climax fight which is also rushed not giving the reader much time to see how far Bruce has come, like the death stroke world was maybe 10 chaps for a character as strong and for a world as rich as that to be given only 10 chaps is crazy.
Overall the pacing is just to fast, the author doesn’t give himself anytime to actually make interesting fights or events which is very apparent in how many chaps he wrote just talking about how much people hated the flash arc.