~35.0 hour of reading·2103 chapter read
Dragonoid
Sep 30, 2024 Joined
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Low rating because after the MC leaves the home world, he streamlines pretty much all of the abilities and techniques that he gets from his identities into one fist technique, which, in my opinion makes you lose all uniqueness, individuality and cool factor, which I didn’t like. also didn’t like how Given the fact that he gets a bunch of bloodlines that he didn’t have any changes to his body in a way like how he gets the demon bull bloodline doesn’t get like horns or anything like that. I think that was kind of stupid, especially that he doesn’t use the lightning that comes with it. I didn’t like how with the two main identities that he gets when he goes to space they become pretty much the all encompassing single rest of the story. I think that was pretty dumb especially the fact that it’s called 1000 hearts and you think they have 1000 identities but in fact he doesn’t so far I’m like 90% of the way through the story and he’s only had maybe 20 identities and I don’t really like how the system became very flexible as in a lot of the identities that he gets when he goes in the space have a lot of downtime in between them like one of his new identities that he got pretty much 30 years to do literally anything I don’t really like how when you look back on it a lot of the identities were kind of pushing him into a direction. I thought that was really dumb but overall I did like when he was on his homework I thought that was done pretty well, but because of the story rest of the story I had to give it a low rating. Also all the Chinese names became very confusing to follow
Just based off the first 70 chapters this novel is a 5/5 for me oddly sweet with an interesting setting. Highly recommend Okay real review had to lower this to 4/5 bc of how poorly executed alot of this was I’ve read about 80 percent now and I can confidently say this author made a lot of this story up on the spot like the constant saying that every copy can be beating even tho we’ve seen and know that almost every sss lvl copy has a 100% ☠️rate, at first the author tries to make the copy’s function like the ghosts in Mysterious Resurgence but that quickly falls through when it’s shown that high lvl copy lords have almost complete control over their copy and don’t particularly have to follow the rules they set when they first made said copy you can tell by the kill mission being changed to solely target the mc in the one copy and how the mcs wife is able to freely hold and move the exit gate at will. These things aren’t as bad until u realize the huge and literally impossible lvl gap that’s between the humans and evil spirits. Like on top of the fact that you have to go to higher lvl copies to get the potential from them you also have to continuously go to higher lvl copies to lvl up so at some point your gonna have to go to a sss ss or even a s lvl copy which is literally a death sentence. Because of how chaotic and random these copies are they don’t function well as adventures or even something interesting to read about. My biggest gripe right now is the mcs growth I hated how easy it was to gain power, after going through his wife’s gate he got lvl 5 power after getting hald of a lord and going through another sss lvl gate he got peak lvl 15 strength and he didn’t even work for it, up til where im at he hasn’t even truly done a copy by himself, then his emotional journey is skuffed by his wife putting him through illusion training where he gets to experience the life he never had which personally annoys me because in my opinion, these experiences should’ve been had with his wife. Overall bad execution 3/5
in 90 chapters the mc almost dies like 20 times the tension had worn off by the 5th near death experience and I really just want the mc to hunt and cultivate. Almost a third of the way through and we haven’t learned much about the world while we did get to know his past life the the mc is made to forget it almost immediately after then when u think the Camila girl would just stay by the mcs side like a ghost the mc runs into the red mist and she sacrifices herself for him like the was quick, then the constant power ups and random shit that he keeps getting like Ik that there are people making him into a god killing weapon behind the scenes but at the pace the story is going it really isn’t a good read. Last but no least there is nationalism honestly I didn’t even think there were countries in this novel given how destructive all the disasters and evil beings are but the author lets us know that yeah there are countries and they’ve all been defeated by the pure land and all of the foreign countries women would kill to have the child of one of the pure lands people bc they are the strongest 〳 ◉ ͜ʖ ◉ 〵 and incase you thought will this could be a made up country nope the mc points out that the pure lands is Xiao country’s equivalent in this world and yes Xiao in this case does mean China bc he’s Chinese and says he’s from the Xiao country. Overall to fast paced and odd ridiculous nationalism Edit: read til 125 yeah I’m shelving this I just personally don’t like how rushed everything is he’s still in life or death battles he has gotten the chance to cultivate he’s still being strung along by the thing behind the scenes etc and it seems like there’s gonna be more nationalism to come. I’m good
shelved the novel at 115, while it didn’t do anything too terrible there was enough bad shit to make me not want to read anymore. Note for anyone starting to write novels do not start wit fanfics bc it doesn’t give you the experience you would need to write a decent stand alone novel, case in point this shit. This novel feels like the author just watched a bunch of ecchi/harem anime and decided that those had the best settings and humor bc why is the first side character that’s introduced a big breasted loli faced incompetent rookie police women then the next side character is his loli faced 12 year old sister who wants to marry the mc and not in a joking way. Already this is off to a bad start idk why Asians are so obsessed wit lolis but everytime these side characters talk they shouldn’t have the adjective loli beside there name shit weird and annoying, also as characters there annoying as hell the police women is an idiot who literally does nothing for the story and the sister just acts like a spoiled brat but bc his family is the mcs weakness he lets her slide. The writing is bad way to much dialogue while other shit is going on like I’ve seen a fight break at the middle of a chapter for dialogue and that same dialogue will continue even into the next chapter, mind you these chapter aren’t very long to begin wit but the author loves to info dump. Constant rehashing of info, I dont need to be told every second that the mc doesn’t see anything wrong wit the way a monster acted bc hes half monster too or i dont need to constantly know about his lvl. The jokes in this novel are terrible like scene where the mc teleport to the sword girls room while she’s bathing on accident (•ˋ _ ˊ•) just for him to have to promise three things to her so that she’ll leave him alone or the scene where he lies twice about his identity to the countermeasures group just for his lie to be close to reality. Overall I couldn’t read anymore the author is clearly an amateur at writing while adding the worst anime troupes to their novel.
Boring af average litrpg novel wit a non human reincarnated mc who’s special power is devour so get ready for insane power jumps. I wouldn’t rate it so low if it weren’t for how bad the authors writing skills are, the constant capturing of the mc in 100 chaps he been caught 4 damn times, and the biggest annoyance is the Chinese novel humor which got old very fast personally; if you like shameless mc humor then you’ll prolly like this but it was for me so I’m stopping
Good novel pretty dark wasn’t a fan of how vague it was at times wit the setting nor did I particularly like the harem that formed but I didn’t hate it bc the mc never got wit anyone nor did they get in the way. The ghost power system was very well done even though I hated how many of the mc’s ghost were just pieces and not whole ghosts.
Kinda like lord of the mysteries pretty good.
Black Dragon Code
Oct 23, 2024
While I do really like this novel I can’t whole heartedly give it a 5 for just how rushed it was looking back on it. Beyond the fact that the author would introduce side characters to the story that would be important later on like the shipmaker dude there are others that we didn’t get to see a follow up on like the first batch of slaves they bought nor do we get to see wat they grew up to be which is a bit disappointing given that their success is a direct representation of how good Caesars policies were, no follow up on the thief girl who loved playing elegy kinda sucked would’ve loved seeing wat she did after her team got annihilated by Caesars radiation ray and then what happened after the elven forest invasion bc we know some of them survived, not having a eladia follow up to see how all of the regions are doing at the end of the story. Almost all of the wars were skimmed through especially the dark wing empire vs the sun doesn’t set empire. I don’t even think the story is fully complete given that they didn’t even kill the outer god, I think it would make more sense to say the author dropped the novel, also we don’t get to see the origins of the trophy case nor do we get to see how many he has left. We also don’t get to see how Odin becomes the lord of twilight Overall good story just unfinished and rushed during important parts
Interesting concept poor execution Just about the only good things in this novel are the slice of life aspect in the Harry Potter world, the interactions between Bruce and katum, and the worlds katum takes Bruce to everything else is very shake to bad. The pacing of this novel is terrible it would be ok if it only extended to the jumped worlds but it doesn’t in hp the story feels just as rushed and all over the place at times like I’m still waiting for Bruce to learn transformation magic and to master all the shit dumbledore was teaching him but instead there is always some ridiculous event taking place it was Jason Todd then the witch and now the flash which has pushed the novel into wat seems to be a climax bc he had to pause the hp world. These events are either very short, Jason Todd, or long and super convoluted, flash. honestly the flash arc is the reason y I don’t like time being introduced to novels bc on top of this being rushed, which u can tell be the author changing the gathering time for the wolf feast to anytime instead of 1 month, you aren’t able to properly follow what going on. Honestly it would take way to long to try and deconstruct why I don’t like the flash arc so imma leave it My biggest gripe is the lack on opportunities Bruce and Katum have to demonstrate their strength a lot of the time it’s just them playing detective and even when they go to other worlds the pacing is so fast they are almost immediately forced into the big climax fight which is also rushed not giving the reader much time to see how far Bruce has come, like the death stroke world was maybe 10 chaps for a character as strong and for a world as rich as that to be given only 10 chaps is crazy. Overall the pacing is just to fast, the author doesn’t give himself anytime to actually make interesting fights or events which is very apparent in how many chaps he wrote just talking about how much people hated the flash arc.
To much China, every other chapter the author finds a way to tie something back to China like for some reason the talismans that the Japanese people are using are written in Chinese and not kanji, the school the mc is going to was founded by a Chinese person some of the writing in the shrines are in Chinese etc it’s like the author doesn’t miss a beat at trying to point out chinas influence in Japan, even tho I highly doubt it to this extent irl, besides the overt nationalism there is xenophobia (≧◡≦) for some reason the author goes on a long ass rant about how corrupt japans government is then he ends it by saying u should never base ur opinions of a group based off a couple good ones then he says their untrustworthy etc etc that’s happens bc a group of old people see him hurt after fighting a demon bear and try to help him Besides the nationalism and xenophobia the story is kinda interesting when it isn’t spending so much time giving us dialogue between the mc and the potential mls like I want the story to progress not read more about the moon lord and the mcs weird relationship that is getting old. Overall 2 out of 5 I like the mc but the story isn’t focusing enough on the stuff that I like