could have been very good but it goes by too quickly. there’s barely any details to any of the action. feels like this would be at most 300-400 chapters and i cannot be bothered to read a story that’s basically just a story-skeleton and no depth.

currently at chapter 262, the MC has been lvl 30 for about 70 chapters with no sign of getting anywhere ahead anytime soon

middle school syndrome. written for emotionally stunted teenage boys. extremely melodramatic for no reason. tries to do the whole noble hardworking strong shōnen MC shtick but everything about its attempts at doing that ring hollow and are so easy to see through to the point where it breaks any sense of immersion to the story. extremely corny at best and at worst it’s plain infuriating. can’t help feeling personally slighted by the writing, surely the author must think the reader is a newborn calf if he believes his hamfisted cliched writing can get anyone meaningfully emotionally invested in this book.

first off all i just want to say that this is much better than the other one on here with the same premise. i think anyone who’s into really arrogant and retardedly domineering would absolutely HATE this. do not read if you are brain dead and like Long Aotian characters. the MC is generally very nice, he doesn’t like going out of his way to kill people while still being decisive enough when it comes to his enemies. he’s no saint but he’s no asshole. has a solid set of supporting characters who have their own storylines and personality that do not revolve entirely around the MC (think something like what you might have read in Top Tier Providence). a huge bonus is also that MC isn’t a sex starved incel sex offender and is for the most part just a normal guy.

very poorly written unfortunately

there’s literally a chapter where the MC r*pes a woman at GUNPOINT. even putting aside the fact that he’s a rapist, MC is like a teenager’s idea of a “cold-hearted” and “ruthless” man who is actually just a bad and stupid. the whole book is juvenile and every interaction between different characters (especially in the chats) is negative IQ while being completely inconsistent with the premise of the book. honestly the only reason i can think of for this book even existing is that it’s some kind of a self-insert power fantasy for the author.

water. a whole sea of water. 44 chapters into the story and the MC is at level 5. many chapters (in a row) are just him arguing with people in the public chat channel. extremely slow pace MC strongly nerfed in terms of luck just so the author can feed you more water. edit: read to about chapter 140 and the author is an emotionally stunted 12 year old

the author might have benefited from having a brain. at least that way he could have thought out a story.

never played plants vs zombies so the whole time i’ve been very lost on what the plants actually do. also desperately needs the fanfiction tag here bc if u don’t know plants vs zombies you basically can’t read most of this

genuinely illegible. can’t barely make any sense of it not bc of the shaky translation (for some reason there are non-chinese characters in crucial places in the raw they’re using) but bc the author seems to be a complete amateur who doesn’t know how to write. In the first 11 chapters neither the MC nor his troops nor ANYONE ELSE has done a single thing. i wager about half of the chapters were *literally* the communications channel chat logs full of what i can only describe as attempted face slapping (but it wasn’t even that? it’s weird and just plain poorly written). i don’t think the writer has any layout for this story, which is a shame bc i really wanted to like this, but he hasn’t even bothered to explain the details of the power system and even the capabilities of his own talent are vague (and not at all like the promised SSSS rank)