trash!!!!!!!!!!!

Yet another author who creates a stupid harem, without ever taking into account the age of the girls, what the author forgot is that it's pidophilia, a mc with a mental age of or less 30/40 years old going out with a girl of 10/11 years old, damn just for that he should throw in prison, this kind of shit is becoming more and more fashionable in fanfic, it's just horrible.

another pro admiral author, but here at an absurd level, I understand that kizaru has surpassed everyone, but to say that the rest are also superior to the yonko, is to not understand anything about one piece, I hate pro admirals, especially those who do not know how to dose like this author... This story tries to pass itself off as a reinterpretation of One Piece, but it completely betrays the spirit of the original work. The main character is portrayed as a Marine who secretly supports the Revolutionary Army, a so-called bringer of justice… but everything he does screams the opposite. He behaves like a tyrant: instilling fear, objectifying women, demanding blind obedience, and judging everyone through a warped personal lens. He’s described as a man of justice, but he acts exactly like a Celestial Dragon — domineering, cold, and obsessed with control. How can he claim to fight for revolution when he embodies everything Dragon stands against? That’s a fundamental contradiction that destroys the story’s internal logic. Even worse, the female characters are completely butchered. Boa Hancock, one of the most dignified and powerful women in One Piece, is reduced to a one-dimensional sex-obsessed caricature, blindly devoted to the MC. The women of Amazon Lily — once proud and independent warriors — now live in constant fear of disappointing him. They’ve lost their strength, their voices, their identities. This isn’t a story about justice. It’s the glorification of a toxic power fantasy, falsely framed as heroism. It’s not a fanfic that honors Oda’s world — it’s an authoritarian rewrite that confuses dominance with greatness.

I don't feel like I'm reading about a 28-year-old MC who transmigrated, but about a MC even more imature than a 6-year-old child. It's ridiculous at that level. Add to that the fact that the author keeps glorifying him even though the MC has literally done nothing, but all he does is accumulate bonuses straight from the goddess of luck... It's extremely frustrating to read. For me, it's the kind of fanfic a 12/13-year-old kid would write, not a fanfic about an adult, unless that adult is a little too retarded!

dumb mc.

This novel had so much potential — a smart, strategic protagonist with access to a custom Minecraft world, using it not for brute power, but as a divine sanctuary, economic engine, and base for spreading a new religion. The early pacing was solid: the MC never attacked first, built faith carefully, and respected the balance of power. I thought, “Wow, this is going somewhere.” Then the author said: “Let’s ruin everything.” Out of nowhere, the MC goes from unknown prophet to messiah of the entire world in two chapters. Seven divine artifacts randomly bless him. The rulers of countless races all bend the knee. There’s no resistance. No diplomacy. No buildup. Just instant godhood. The writing turns into glorified divine fanfiction: – The Ender Dragon wants to have his child. – Elves rename themselves “Angels” to worship him. – Dwarves treat Redstone as holy scripture. – Sirens are “so happy they don’t miss home.” – Resurrection becomes casual magic. All tension dies. The world’s logic dies. The reader’s investment dies. The worst part? The author set up a brilliant, believable path of growth — and then lit it on fire for shiny miracles, lazy power scaling, and cringe-worthy praise scenes. It’s not a story anymore. It’s a propaganda slideshow where the MC is perfect and everyone else exists to worship him. Want smart politics, strategic influence, or earned respect? Look elsewhere. This is a masterclass in how to destroy your own worldbuilding for cheap wish fulfillment. Avoid. Don’t even read half a chapter. It’s a divine betrayal.

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