By chapter 40 MC go round and round in his emo phrase and finally decided to be superman and nanny the whole world 24x7 and also personally reveal his weakness of kryptonite to nick fury, even thinking how long it'd take for hydra to find out and shockingly 2 chapters later hydra kidnap him with kryptonite. Author seem to not know what to do with the story so he twist and turn and finally made it into another dc comic with nerfed superman.

no logic. author force the plot by bringing sage of six path at chapter 10 to nerf MC and make him behave. Why even start with such a big cheat if you are gonna neuter him in 2 chapter max. Its a bait and switch.

This is not a story, its a collection of rants and monologues about the authors views on the ninja world mixed with communist propaganda and ideals The mc meets a new character, goes on 10 chapters worth of monologue about his theory on peace, world unification, politics, history etc, then theres one chapter of story where he moves to another location, meets new characters and repeats the same thing This just keeps happening over and over with a vague outline of a possible story and the promise of what it could be but no real story at all, its just better to ask chatgpt about different types of government and read about them, atleast that way you get some real world knowledge instead of this bs political encyclopedia from some chinese otaku author.

I dont even know what to say. even saying its ilogical will be an insult to that word. Its like story written by someone with ADHD brain on drug while suffering from bipolar mental breakdown. Its that bonkers.

Translation is terrible. Most magic spells are wrong or switched. MC name Xiao Er. The fight in hogwarts express is the chinese xianxia trash i've ever seen. System is cool but author said he'll remove it later.

It's weird. MC has preconceived notions of all the canon characters, and he sticks to them without even getting to know them in real life. When he met Hagrid, he went over the top to kiss his ass for no reason. Hagrid himself wouldn't like such fawning behavior, but the minute he met Dumbledore, he went crazy with accusations and insults, knowing he wouldn't retaliate. I mean, will he still dare to act like that to any professor, Fudge, Voldemort? NO, it's because Dumbledore's kindness makes him an easy target. It's classic bully behavior. At times, it looks more like the author is speaking instead of the book character and spreading his own biases through him.

Author went crazy around chapter by introducing made in china robot to sunegakure and bringing in umbrella corp and zombie virus and all that... the whole become a crazy mess.

This is an abomination, a creation of a psychopath. Don't read it, it'll only taint your soul, and if someone can find the author pls call the cops.

Its a good OP Uchiha troupe novel.. Better cuz he doesn't play useless games with F4 for no reason. Good novel if you're into this genre, which I am.