Does the author have a love for dogs? I think the story would be better without it. The story seems a bit stupid, it’s hard to understand what’s going on.
The idea is good, but the execution sucks. The character’s personality is too messy. The writing is a bit immature, maybe it can be rewritten in the future.
The concept is good, and it started not too bad, but as the story develops it becomes worse. The direction of the story and the mc character, I don’t have the proper words, but I’d say it’s unnecessary.