Yap, yap, yap… it has an interesting premise, the MC isn’t that bad, but for everything that’s holy the amount of yapping is unbearable

A good novel, not perfect. But a god novel nonetheless. No harem, good premise, it has its flaws, but compres to others it is outstanding. Being the first work of this author it deserves five stars.

The rhythm is absolutely terrible, always getting side-tracked

It is good, but sometimes it fails to be consistent with its own logic, like he introduces a “resource” but it can’t be automatically replicated like the rest of the items in the dungeon, until that point it hadn’t been mentioned the need to buy them like that, it was implied that those mobs that he had in the lines were like a template of sorts and now he needs to buy or create them one by one… it’s good but but it could be better.

Good premise, horrible execution. Tries to be comedic but the jokes don’t land. I’ve almost read all the available chapters, but it was more of a ‘how bad can it be’ situation. Don’t read it, it’s a waste of time.