##Ora Ora Ora!!!” Chakra began to rotate wildly, and incredibly terrifying power surged with each continuous punch, each one heavier and stronger than the last. Crack! “Ho-how could this be…?” At this moment, time seemed to stop. A large number of fragments floated up from the orange-red Susanoo. This Susanoo, like a glass bottle, seemed ready to shatter at any moment. “No! I have such power too!!! I have endured such pain, carrying the hopes of my father and mother, for the Village, for the Clan, for Sasuke… I cannot die!!! Guah, power, come forth!!!” ## I feel embarrassed just reading this story. The characters have been made to seem stupid and cheesy. The main character himself suddenly seems to have the goal of destroying the world. His goal came out of nowhere, as if the entire world had inflicted torment on him.

One of the stupidest stories I've ever read. With the dumbest MC to boot.

I highly recommend this story. It's undoubtedly one of the most enjoyable I've read in the football genre. The positives. Lack of extreme nationalism. Unlike other novels where the main characters claim to make the Chinese national team the best in the world, this one is much more realistic. There's not much attachment to one's former identity or overly dramatic situations. His system, or rather his cheating, is very reasonable. It takes effort to evolve. A lot of effort. His talent doesn't come from nowhere. Moreover, his system has no conscience. It's more like an innate talent. Very pleasant format. Systems that always appear capable of communicating or that give all sorts of missions have always greatly annoyed me. The MC doesn't have an annoying personality. At least not too much. There's no racism. He treats everyone with the same attitude. Then the negatives. Although his development is gradual, in the story, it's still too rapid. The author seems to want him to become the best player in the world in just 20 years. I don't know why he wants to improve so much. He wants to win everything, too quickly, unfortunately. It would have been a little better if he had reached his peak around 23 or 24 years old. Which, since he was 17, allows us to see his career a little longer. Because given the format of his cheating, he would have no equal once he reached the top. So he would no longer even have any interest in playing. Ending his career at such a young age would be a bit regrettable. Well, that's just my opinion. Another negative point: he seems to have a big problem with his emotions. Almost as if he can't control himself. Anyway, a pretty good story. Also, another positive point: he seems faithful to one partner. Another very enjoyable fact to read. There you go. Objectively, it would be more like a 4/4.5 star, but oh well. Enjoyable reading, everyone.

Not bad for the moment

Trash 🗑️🗑️

There's a problem. A big problem, even! Did I read the same story as you? Why a 5-star rating from so many people? It makes absolutely no sense. The MC is stupid. He's acting like an idiot. Both the real Raymond and the reincarnated one. His actions are completely confusing. Why give 5 stars without stating the reason?

One of the best Naruto fanfics? I don't understand why it's so great.

Boring! Just the first story with The Count's Daughter exhausted me. All that for that.

Everything seems completely confusing. Why is he talking so much? Even Peter Parker doesn't talk that much, damn it.

Super story