The story is good. Unfortunately, when it was just beginning, the author finished the story in one chapter. He literally compressed hundreds of chapters into one. So while it's good, I don't recommend it. Rushed ending or missing ending... it's up to you.

I don't get it. I really don't get it. Why is this story so highly rated and highly recommended? It's been a long time since I've read such an annoying novel. The first 20 chapters alone are already unbearable. Her brother and her parents, her in-laws and her family... I read nothing but stupid, pointless conflict. The characters don't seem intelligent at all. What kind of crap is this?

It's good, but at the same time, it's quite boring, I must admit. It's always the same as with other wizarding novels. No time to rest, always on the run or about to run away. He's always making enemies inexplicably.

A good story to pass the time. I would have given it 5 stars if it weren't for the two flaws I found. The first is that the story moves too quickly. I've always hated the kind of story where the main character becomes the strongest in the world in just a few months. That's exactly the case here. He becomes a god in less than a year. Everything happens so quickly that it's too unrealistic. It's about territory management, kingdom building, but everything happens in months. What's the point? At least two years, or five years... It's more reasonable. Whether it's in construction or even agriculture, where it takes time to see reasonable changes. Economics, development, etc. But no, everything happens quickly. And even when there are areas that require enough time to see results, as if by magic, in the following chapters, he finds ways to speed things up again. It's annoying. The second point is that the disaster stories follow one another non-stop. Before the MC's arrival, the world had been going well for thousands of years. After his arrival, in just a few months, a thousand-year-old empire was destroyed, the underworld collapsed, evil gods escaped, demons from the abyss invaded the main plane, the original plane appeared... In short, it's the end of the world. Just like that. Without warning at all. No time to settle down for the main character. The story is just good enough to pass the time.

As always, the longer the wait, the greater the disappointment. 😪 😪

An excellent story, but unfortunately, the flaws are even more so. As previous comments have mentioned, the power system is very complex. Even at the Foundation Establishment level, they are literally overpowered. Their attacks influence tens of thousands of kilometers of their environment. Almost all of them have the ability to predict, control karma, manipulate those weaker than themselves, and use the Heavenly Dao. In other books, this is almost the maximum level. They can even reincarnate at will. The Golden Core, let alone the Golden Core. We could almost call them immortal emperors. And with the Birth Soul, they have the ability to create small worlds. That's not really the problem; I'm not against the complex power system. On the contrary, it can be interesting, but the terms used are difficult to understand. In the Foundation Realm, advancement requires certain items or treasures that are incomprehensible. Despite trying to read carefully, I still can't understand it. And the second point: the world seems too small. There are barely four major forces. And the conflict revolves around them. In short, it seems like a world too small for people who are too powerful.

Excellent!

Story ruined by an impulsive MC

Why is all the LOTM fanfiction coming out lately so weird? The amount of confusion in it... Okay, I'll stop. Good luck to everyone with this poison.

The story is different from others of the same genre, certainly, but it's boring. The character interactions are overly dramatic and melodramatic. It's completely unnecessary. Some over-the-top reactions...