It's really not bad, quite funny in places and a bit abstract at times. Overall I liked it, some moments are very good and in places perfectly suit my tastes. But there are also quite significant downsides here: 1. A system that has no other meaning than to give the hero additional "cheats" at checkpoints. And it appeared only at the beginning, for the starting cheats, and at the end for the final cheats. And the cheats are not exactly mind-blowing or interesting - mostly just a regular level-up within the Naruto universe's genealogy. This system almost turned me off this fanfic. 2. Economic and ideological conquest of the world sounds interesting, and it was, until everything started repeating itself. There are only a few schemes here and they quickly exhausted their interesting moments. There are essentially no consequences for the hero and Konoha, and many points are mentioned very exaggeratedly, but sparingly. Some moments still cause some confusion *****SPOILER***** how, for example, the ideology of the communist Madara and the capitalist hero are combined, if the hero essentially took over the world. ***end*** 3. The attitude towards the unhealthy overtime of subordinates looks very unhealthy. Several times, for the comic effect it is normal, but it has become a standard operating mode. In general, the comic effect here is caused by many really not funny moments, although sometimes a very healthy portion of black humor appears. An ambiguous moment. 4. Well, and the biggest minus for me is a very crumpled ending - many moments appeared only to flicker and have no meaning (characters of the original Naruto universe), many plot lines ceased to make sense or were finished very unsatisfactorily, something in general remained like a large drawn pie, most of the repetitions were concentrated at the end and it felt like a simple increase in text for the sake of text. And this is now my main complaint - if there had been a normal ending, I would have confidently given it 4 stars despite the previous minuses.

The text does not feel smooth for me, but overall it is ok. The premise of the beginning in a small world for such a genre is quite surprising, usually the start is in the main, native world of magicians (even if in a standard low-level location). The details of improvement are still very vague and in general the hero is only gaining strength. And whether there will be further research and development on the built basis or the hero will turn into a collector of all sorts of ancient super technologies is not yet clear. But it seems to me that for now the hero is more inclined to the second option, although I still hope for independent development of unique methods, and not blind practice of incomprehensible antiquities. The characters are not very voluminous, but not cardboard either. Basically, they are shown quite one-sidedly and without much description of appearance. That is, very standard for a Chinese novel. The author's tic about "the eyes of *insert character name* reflect the work of thought" is a little annoying, it is used very often and this is annoying.

Poorly written. Too many exaggerations from the very beginning. Firstly, this is the hero's personality - 3 days since the apocalypse began, killed 1 dog, 1 thug, 1 "boss" 3 1 stages of level 3, several basic "zombies" and already a personality colder than absolute zero, "a natural born killer" lol. Secondly, these are the descriptions, what is happening and the writing style - the descriptions are again very exaggerated as for weak chickens of the initial level, what is happening is very strained and mainly moves in favor of very fast progression through the plot and showing how cool and cold the main character is, well, and the author's writing style shows that there won't even be a paragraph without an exclamation mark here to show all the possible emotionality, tension and importance of each moment that happens. Thirdly, this is the power system, the author says that the panel is unique to the hero, while all the characters built a "system" of designations and concepts in just 3 days. Like who bothered and distributed the same title "Stardust"? If you make such intricate systems, then there should be something that supports the distribution and maintenance of the basic classification, and not "hop" and everyone at once decided it was a good idea to call themselves stardust, instead of warriors, hunters, evolvers, psionics or first level/stage mages or something like that. Maybe later this will be explained, but now all interest has been lost for me.

It was okay from the start, not too good, but not bad either. Overall it feels dull and not very interesting. Many of the storylines were frustrating, mostly from other characters and the "original" world building from the author. A lot could have been done better, and the author himself understands this. But in the end, he finished what he started, albeit in the spirit of the rest of the work. Many times I had the feeling of a roller coaster - the hero gets into a critical situation and it is not clear how he will solve it and in the next chapter it turns out that somehow everything has already been decided. Because of this, the calculating hero seems not so calculating, but rather a daredevil who thinks about the consequences not before doing something, but after the consequences appear. There were a few interesting moments with his abilities, but basically it's all from the category of "more abilities for the god of abilities!" There is no special personality or morality here either, everything is for the achievement of the highest goal - "more abilities for the god of abilities!" As a waste of time - OK, as something special or interesting - no.

The cultivation is a bit confusing in places, but overall an enjoyable read.

The novelty quickly wears off, it became boring, monotonous and repetitive. Stupid intrigues are tiresome, a lot of text is devoted to repetitions and some boring aspects that the author tries to present as interesting and plot-forming, but he failed. The world itself seems boring and gray - the thoughtfulness of what is happening raises doubts. The author goes into all sorts of unimportant details and parts, while stretching the text several times. There seem to be no interesting, worthy aspects.

Quite simple, but quite enjoyable. There are some far-fetched moments, like his age and how his strength relates to it, deep trust in the hero from most of those around him, no one normally asked the source of his knowledge, some moments are drawn out (the second shinobi world war as a starting point for many plans is simply an eyesore), some problems with the timeline. If you read it as a very strong AU, then there are no special problems.

Direct invincible flow. The hero does not particularly terrorize other countries, but he does not like them too much either, and they are not given much attention at all - the hero gave a reason for the creation of a "united earthly federation" and dumped himself in the upper world, and let the rest flounder as they want. The female characters are simple, and the hero does not have any special feelings for them. In general, he prefers one-night stands and relationships without special obligations, but he somehow helps his companions (of which there are not many due to high standards). The power system is quite simple and understandable, the powers themselves are diverse in essence, but in fact they are shown quite straightforwardly. At a certain point, cultivation appears, but the initial system still remains the basis. The hero's system is also quite simple, but it sometimes sends conflicting signals: should you spend points on processing records from equipment; can you get records by destroying equipment; what are the limits of absorption of similar records and are they needed at all? and some others. If you don't think about it too much, such moments don't affect the overall impression.