Mess

Too old cliches

It's a bit difficult to read without knowing the universes very well, the author gives some explanations, but they don't really help. Although sometimes the author writes things that are not even related to the main plot that are unclear - some dialogues, actions and relationships with girls or other characters are often either poorly written or poorly translated, so they are incomprehensible. Up: In the opening chapters of each post-index/railgun world at this point, the author is liberally throwing out a fetish for pissing girls, and there's too much attention and text given to it.

Some things look very naive and overly simple, the author overcomplicated some things, and some things seem simply useless, despite the fact that the author says that they are “important”.

Too formulaic, got boring very quickly

In some places the translation is too abstract, I can't understand what's going on. Otherwise, it's a typical representative of the genre, except that the cheat is not systemic, but artifactual. Up: be careful, with the first meeting of foreigners (here it’s the Japanese) it became clear that the novella is very poisonous ~chapter 170.

Not bad, but not quite what I expected. Over 150 chapters, I read mostly about everyday life at school from the perspective of different secondary characters, the author is either nostalgic himself or tries to play on the readers' nostalgia, but for me, as a non-Chinese reader, it works poorly and such moments feel boring. One good thing here is that the author does not use so many templates from other immortal urban novels: there are no constant slaps in the face (although the hero often takes revenge), there are no sects or families hidden from the world, there is no spiritual energy revived and there was no incredible harem while I was reading.

At the beginning, the author presented what was happening too haphazardly. And in the future, the author will continue to have problems with the narrative. I read 50 chapters (a volume, in fact) and some things simply do not make sense, the author rushed with something, something appeared too abruptly, and for some things the author simply does not give a normal explanation, only some external manifestations. The author omits too much as something self-evident.