in the name of steadiness the MC is very unstable instead of cultivating to improve his strength to become stable he is always wasting his spirit stones on talisman and not trying to properly increase his strength

just the first chapter shows how friendly Chinese are

no proper definition of realm or cultivation and there is no proper mention of the accumulated experience the story is confused as shit like literally the attack on kunning palace is so clitched and literally when he advanced to innate realm he was given three opponents to prove his strength Chinese way like literally there are people above his realm fighting and he tries to escape isn't he becoming a target and there is an idiom in China acting like a pig to hunt a tiger but don't dull your edges and become a pig just after getting the refining skills he want to refine the divine sword to perfection and I am a bit confused because there is no distinction between a knife and a sword and the divine sword which is broken from the tip to the middle is equal to a dagger I don't even know how anyone can use it to fight when there is no edge and only a blunt metal piece and hilt This time it was a huge loss. After spending so much energy and energy to use the Heavenly Thunder Escape, it would take only a year or two for him to return to his peak state. and too much grammatical error the way he promotes the thinking capability of the pure yang soul but then thinks of things which can be thought by an ordinary person really dulls the atmosphere like I have read in other works where they use it more efficiently bro like literally we are following him from the moment he learned the soul martial art but then when he uses it in the next two chapters they write astonishingly he learned the soul martial arts like 😒 Wtf and that manager zhang and eunuch Zhao sit near his yard like whenever something happens they just rush in like wtf bro i mean shouldn't they be busy or knock at least but nope they just tends to rush in he always complain about how dangerous the trip is when he is always venturing towards the danger like he knows that the demon are parasitic on the xia family but still he want to go there and investigate when he really knows that he would have to fight out but still instead of training he would wastehistime

I don't think the author is in right mind I mean in chapter 5 he says that one of the cultivator is a casual cultivator while being a member of the sect and the foundation building elder just after giving a lecture for 2 to 3 hours is so tired like WTF

there is no common sense. the merging of martial art is totally stupid I mean if that is so good why doesn't he merge different blood refining martial art to create a better martial art but instead he would always talk nonsense like the poison sutara is so powerful like WTF how the heck is that even possible just buy reading the books and upgrading it he can know poison that are not even invented yet and then the nonsense about the dead guards

literally the vice principal or any professor did not even try to attend in person to explain to him about the reality of Hogwarts and how magic is real? and even during the shopping period there was no professor or adult to supervise him to make sure that he won't get scammed like literally the next road from the entry is the knockturn alley where black wizards live

two stupid how the introduced a vampire literally stalking Gwen Stacy in broad day light and she literally don't into ghost spider after the vampire was killed did the author even did some research like Gwen Stacy hided her identity even from her best friend Peter in that universe until his death but but hair shows her identity carelessly to Mc and then she is f****** uncomfortable having her identity out then why the f*** shit did she did

boring plot knowing the disadvantage of warrior and not wanting to fight in close combat he still chose warrior and there's a f****** limit to how can make a Chinese skill and even after being a warrior he does not take responsibility in a team fight and instead portrays the other team members of how they are pressuring him to fight in close combat then he is the only f****** warrior in that team