The idea is good, but the execution is bad, to much information and filler, which coming at the same time, making it very confusing and boring, it seems the author wants to make a detail works, but if its boring, no one will read it.

MC is very stupid, have thousands of troops, but needs to go alone to enemy camp, and only survive due to plot armor. So stupid.

At first it was good and sweet, but in the middle the story seems too confused, the system is not being used at all, no effect to the story, Seems that the author really too confused how to write the story. Please dont waste your time on this.

bad routine, you just need to write steadily, and it will become readable, but no, you need to be special snowflakes. bad.

Stupid mc, ohh my house is leaking, oh my people is famished, oh its winter soon and my people will be frozen. Ok, lets buy some useless expensive ring.