Too much nonsense.

Good concept but for me there's 3 problem. 1. World Selection, not every worlds are suitable to follow this sect building theme. 2. The effects from point 1, balance between various variable in the world itself were too broken. Honestly, it feels uncomfortable to read because I always felt that it doesn't fit well with the world background. The most Conspicuous about it is the lack of conflict. It doesn't need to be a war like conflict but at least there should be ideological conflict or something else that happen in the world so it could be an interesting plot point. But unfortunately there's almost none of it. 3. Actually the third point also has something to do with point 1 and 2. Originality. What I mean here is the originality of the world themselves. Some world has their own attractiveness, Naruto and the Ninja Skill, Douluo with Soul Ring mechanism, etc. The existence of the MC, made this originality to Dissapeared, almost none if it were mentioned in the story. This make the fan fiction story to be boring.

Too much drama, there's no need to have so many emotional entanglement right?? I could understand Kuina, Zoro, and some people who spend time with MC. But Hancock?? Honestly just kill her and be done with it. Just because she is beautiful or what?? Stop simping.

A good read, but not well organized. There's a lot of repeated information, there's also some information that got changed arbitrary without any reason. Just like the Insect Clan Girl that was supposed to be MC disciples, she just Dissapeared without any reason. I was looking forward to her progress in the book. Like I said basically a good read but not well organized. Edit: Toward the end the story turned into a roundabout story without any direction, with a lot of water. Reducing the star.

Honestly it was pretty good, but it's too jumbled. Wasting too much time on unnecessary stories.

Honestly, why is every transmigrator think and act like a children?? Their soul is old enough so please write them as a mature type and not some hot blood idiotic teenagers

Great work. Why the hiatus??

What's with the sudden world change???

Good at first, but not so much later. Remind me of The Lord Empire, MC got so horny that it gets fuking annoying. Such a great concept, ruined by MC lower head.