Too much unnecessary filler

You're just copying the original story while adding a few stories off your own.

Too much repetition on the war story.

What's with the ending??

Repetitif. It's good at the start but get boring rather quick.

How should I put it?? For such an amazing Golden Finger the progress of the story was too slow. It's too underwhelming. So much character in which I deem to be unnecessary detailed.

Interesting concept but honestly you need to learn a bit about gaming. What a chaotic world.