Good concept, a shame MC is an idiot Edit: 350 chapter in but he was still in the novice area. Maybe because the MC was set as someone who is clearly one with a bad brain, the plot progression follows his brain capacity so it was really slow. Anyway it gets too complicated for a novice area. Another Edit : Honestly I don't know what's going on here. There's no clear explanation on what's going, it seems author just muddled his way through the story.

I agree with DarkFairy. It's a good book with too many details. Honestly the detail itself is good, but the way it was written made it confusing for us the reader. It was a bit too jumbled. Also towards the end, just like many other novels it feels lacking and kind of missing some part, but it's still a good book.

Good book, but it gets boring and how should I said it? Too many unnecessary things towards the latter part. There's too many woman and it took so much to tell their interactions which gets too many now. His character is a bit too cowardly even at the latter part, damn it he got the strength now why so fukin wussy.

Good read. But I'm a bit confused, is there no resources or maybe a better cultivation techniques from the future?? I think it's kinda a waste.

It was really good for me. For those who said that it turns bad because the MC changes, He did but not to the point it became bad. Anyway most of their dissatisfaction were already addressed in the novel, there's a reason for all those change and it was quite a good reason.

Good fanfic, If he was to created his original jutsu then it would be better. As for the Topan guy above, Honestly you need to go get yourself educated. Author already explained why reviving himself was that complicated.

Too much nonsense

Author said he/she is a new author and since it is a fan fiction there's no need to comment too much on the book, but precisely because you're new and this is just a fan fiction you need to know what you need to correct. 1. Too rushed. Since this is a fan fiction, there's actually no need for you to think about many variable in writing, you only need to do a good pacing and yet you didn't do a good job on it. 2. Few Detail. There's no in depth explanation on too many things, not just MC. This is such a waste, you can actually do some in depth detail on some things to practice your writing. 3. Plot. Some plot you changed is not attractive, like I said in the first point, since you have no need to think about world creation you should be able to adjust the rest to the best state possible. 4. The system. Honestly , there's a little bit too many system novel this days. If you want to do a system thing then precision, detail, and concept is important. Doing it half assed is redundant. 5. New World Addition. This is actually the biggest trap for all kind of fanfic, even if there's connection between the two world I suggest not to do this. Especially if you can't do it properly, it would only create a big hole for the novel. There's too many things mixed up in this novel, unnecessary. Someone who read this review, please copy paste it to wherever this novel was originally posted.

Decent Story and Plot. But the balance is a bit.....