The naming sense of author is zero.

Too messy.. A good plot was ruined. I don't understand why you just had to mess it up with rubbish technology

Pure rubbish.. A cultivation novel with good potential was made to be this shitty.. I'm sure I can never act like that if I'm a player in a cultivation world.. No. Manner, everything is always chaos... It's not even funny.. Rubbish

Piece of shit... What a disappointment.. Author brain must be dead to write this rated it 0.00001

Everything is too messed up... No time passage specification and also the time goes so fast we don't even know the activities he does, it's always suddenly "six days later" and so on