~510.9 hour of reading·30653 chapter read
Spade
Aug 27, 2022 Joined
All time reader rank #584

Reviews

5 stars to offset the idiot who left 1 star with no explanation.
This is very confusing, in the first chapter with little introduction the MC creates a magic gun, then he doesn't attend Hogwarts but makes friends who do attend and visit and write letters with them almost daily.
The synapse made the book sound really nice. However, the protagonist has very little presence. Everything Is about these 3 random characters he made (not the protagonist) and this friend group he built with them; it's to the point the synapse doesn't even match.
Tom is king! Do not falter in the face of those Jerry Heretics.
Dog Author; why bother pretending to balance when you play like this? in 5 chapters mc breaks through 17 levels only 1 year time skip completely unreasonable.
I really enjoyed this one. The ending does feel a bit rushed, likely because the author started with a wonderfully slow and detailed pace, which later shifted to a much faster and less descriptive style. This disparity makes the ending feel rather rushed, but it’s not too problematic. I liked how the main character and Luna created a world for the wizards to live in and eventually became immortal to explore other worlds. While there were some aspects I didn't like as much, these were more about personal preferences than actual flaws. Overall, it’s a well-done Harry Potter fanfiction and I’d rate it a solid 10/10.