It seems fine, didnt really catch my attention though. The main character is strong at the start, but then starts teaching people chakra refinement, i thought he would atleast have something that kept him unique. Also, he gave fugaku itachis eyes. Gving him a ems, which is fine i guess, but he doesnt even have one yet.

I wanted to give this th8ng a chance cause the idea was cool, but it was a huge disappointment. Spent 200 years and couldn't even make a stable rasengan, then spent decades again....with him having mastered many different rasengan...but then shows him getting excited over finally having a rubber ball to practice rasengan!? How does that make sense!? Keep in mind he also supposedly had supreme chakra control now, but can't do simple shit like that. Tajima also seems to have manhakyou sharringan. Completely stupid .

It's pretty good. It's just the last 4 chapter's words were all put in the wrong order. One moment he's talking to kurenai the next he's fighting Danzo, the next he's in ben sleeping... If the updated chapters are the same I don't have any hope for this novel.

Honestly...its not even the translation thats the problem. It's being slowly but surley fixed. But the story seriously sucks....or rather the way it's written. Like someone said...seems like it was written by a kid....the Author speed runs through everything...theres no description of who looks like what....no inner dialogue...just plain. Still have to give atleast 4stars for ben 10....need more...maybe we'll get a good one some day. Edit. Kinda like it now. Just had to get used to the first few chapters. Changed to 5 stars. Edit. Gonna take a break for now, let tge chapters build. Would be good if he traveled to otger universes like dc or marvel.

Very good

I enjoyed it so far, hes not OP at the beginning, its only after the boros arc that he became the strongest on Earth( except for Saitama ofc). He also has relations with almost all sexy females, not really my type but whatever. Eventually he, Saitama and Garou were sent to the gourmet world of Toriko. I stopped there to give it a chance to build more chapters.

Hes still a crybaby after being a grown ass man....stupid.

So far pretty good, just gonna wait for chapters to pill up.

It seems like a funny story, but also wishy washy with no real plot to follow. I would've been fine if only the MC acted like a idiot, but he's infected other characters as well....