I would've rated it better but not only is the racism so blatant but there's a rushed feeling when reading this.
Also, there are better alternatives to read on this site...
This wasn't written as well as I hoped, felt kinda bland. However, I'm giving it 5 stars because I hope to get more of these types of novels in the future.....
3.5 for me. There's constant mention about 'Westerners' doing this and that over and over. What really irritated me was just how much of an asshole this guy is to his women. He treats them like actual slaves....
but besides that it's not that bad for a time waster.
I really wanted this to be good....I really did.
Unfortunately, the plot is written haphazardly with no rhyme or reason. I think the Author actually came up with the plot as he wrote it. The characters act all weird, there's no actual intelligent people either.
Pretty good. Uses makes puppets/armor to fight. Not OP yet and pretty fun. The characters behave like they would and are not Chinese young masters.
Edit. Still enjoyable, I just don't like the Outcast world, so I skip it every time.
Edit. *SPOILER*
Although it's still 5 stars, I must warn you that the Author decides to split the book at chapter 280ish. Basically he writes another story of the MCs clone going to the DC world without finishing the Marvel part.
After some DC adventures, he returns to Marvel and finishes it completely then retursn to DC again.
I don't like how low this book is. I'm only at chapter 34, but so far ist been good, especially for a ben 10 fic.
There were some confusions with the Aliens he has unlocked and what he recently unlocked, but not big enough to care. The Mc actually uses his common sense, unlike they usually do. The fight scenes are also pretty good.
Also, the Mc only told Gwen that he came from another Universe and the omnitrix, which isn't a big deal. This Universe is the one Gwen belongs to in Into the multiverse.
Novels confusing. Also, I think Luncifer Morningstar is female in this?
I'm pretty sure Venom too, but maybe I'm wrong. Anyways, the story is written without logic whatsoever.
Joining the mob of useless reviews. I just like the concept. Like 'My Perfect Run' which I'm planning on reading soon.
Edit. It's a 2 star from 5 right now. The deadspace part was great, but after that the MC just got nerfed. He couldn't rewind in the real world without consuming the energy he got from deadspace.
In the next world, everytime he rewound, he lost 10% of his power....pretty stupid nerf. Especially after I read the Perfect Run.