Self insert-ception the author inserts himself as the mc and he makes the later self insert into the lives of the heroines via the diary. At times its a bit too much and the story feels like its stagnating.

No need for the bias anymore. This is great. It used to be 5 stars because MC signed for my favorite italian team. But now it's because the football knowledge is there, from the banter to the actual game. Some controversial statements have been made but for anyone that knows what these racist crowds do they are welcome. I enjoyed how the author dealt with it. I enjoy how he is dealing with the corrupted chinese FA. This book is quality it would be perfect if you know the MC wasn't god within a season. However as i said in another football novel. Nobody would read about a person struggling to make the team or that maybe scored 3 goals in 38 games as a striker.

Impressive for now. The author isn't hiding behind tang roach to keep writing.

Author didnt know how to bring the series to an end so he went with the bet with roach tang trope. I'm quitting there i might read the last chapter when the tag changes to completed. Until now it was fine, the harem was obnoxious but it's a douluo fanfiction so it's to be expected. The whole three legged crow plot was fine, and the stuff around it too. Until the bet it was 4 stars now i'll lower it to 3. Author is fine with killing characters but when it comes to tang san nah.

It's just another grooming underage girls simulator. Could've been interesting with the system and the spirit he got. However most the story is about how he got this and that teenager girl with modern pick up techniques, or how he deflowers them.

The author adds cruelty and depravity to characters that used to be just hypocritical and two faced. On one side everything that's written could've happened so you can tell the author put thought into it. But he excuses the rapist douluo and turned the first accused into a rapist too for plot points. If anything this author has deep knowledge of the dark side of humans and he used it here. To disgust the reader and push the envelope.

It was a really good ride. Looking back at the beginning its been a long journey. The mc is good, smart, brave, petty and never backs down. The cheat is potent but has many conditions that make the story good. The harem, well at the end he was picking flowers I guess. The first 2 made sense, the third one was logical. The 4th and the 5th are based on the original character behaviors and the 6th well at that point why not. All in all very good fanfiction one that I might read again in 5 or 6 years when I forget about it.

Author made it to the end. I couldn't i just skipped the last 100 chapters. It's not bad but the part where the cannon happens is a bit boring. 3/5 for the pre douluo1 1/5 for the rest because of boredom gonna even it and give this a 2