Honestly, it’s not a bad novel. However, it strongly clashes with my personal taste and triggers a lot of my insecurities. Because of that, I’d like to warn readers who might feel the same way (no offense to those who enjoyed it).
There is a heavy focus on promiscuity. Almost every potential heroine is a dual cultivator—and if you know what that implies, you’ll understand the issue. They are neither virgins nor emotionally exclusive, often with very high body counts. The MC himself is similar in this regard.
Promiscuity, open-style relationships, and casual dual cultivation are simply not for me, so I couldn’t enjoy the story despite its other merits.
Also, karma is a thing in Cultivation, there is a reason why promiscuity is regarded as unorthodox method.
Notice how most of those who gave low stars didn't even finish 50 chapters...
All notes aside, this is one of the best cultivation novels I have ever read. VERY underrated and the MC is likeable too. Despite being cautious, he still retains his emotions and acts like an actual human being. And don't worry, he remains cautious no matter how strong he gets.
And the sect he joined is one of the best I have ever seen with everyone getting along in harmony. No random arrogant elder. No random young master or anything. From the sect master down to the normal disciples, they all get along very well.
Also, chapter 425 is peak. No spoilers tho.
It's really good that most person in novel also read novel and know normal urban level novel like when ever I see these other inferior novel good it feels so çringe but this one this one is chaotic good Novel
Author this craziness is good definitely good really good hahha
Really better than 99% of other this type of novel
Western medicine only looks at the surface, Chinese medicine involves qi and blood.
Now this fucking is wrong
Also please stop with builshit racism and ďont act like your country never killed people
I really like your novel it's crazy funny but wiþh this more and I can't what it
Also other reader of you have problem just change the japn word with Dick China or dragondicksucker china
Anyway if they want to be racist then let them I just fuck these fucker word insted
Also most other villain are in china bit I never heard Author use the word little motherfuxker Chinese people but they can use little devil japan.
See just change the word and it's feels so good
Ye Cheng, covered in blood, stood in the void, "Damn it, I treated myself like DicksukerChinese!"
He actually created a scene of tearing DicksukerChinese apart with his bare hands!
Pah!
I'm not DicksukerChinese!
My enemies are DicksukerChinese, and all of my enemies' families are DicksukerChinese!
Also all the things comes from your country when wtf is other country people comes from.
The literal best cultivation novel I’ve seen. The power system is the most consistent and complete, no romance or harem. No power creep. Good foreshadowing. Good concepts, revisiting old ideas and characters, not too many things to remember.
Characters are really good. Good dynamics, good world building. Dao Qiongcang is still absurd. Bazhun’an lives up to the hype.
Ignore the other reviews, they didn’t even read 10% of the novel. Some of them are literally 1% of the novel reviews. Imagine reading lord of the mysteries and giving one star before Klein even becomes a Beyonder.
..This review is based on chapter 1/300..
First of all, if the synopsis wasn't clear, the work is about an MC who became a fisherman and starts from scratch to earn money. Then, he begins to prosper, buying new boats, and catching new types of fish.
First, one of the strong points of this work is the MC's family, which is very well-constructed. However, because it is large, there is a downside to this work. The MC has two parents, three brothers, and two sisters, but they are all called "1, 2, 3 brothers" or "Father Lin," "Mother Li," to their parents. This is a designation. The author didn't really give the characters names. I don't know if the MTL translation is wrong, but to me, this is ridiculous. The family "plot" is well-constructed. On the other hand, we don't even know the characters' names. Another important point is that the MC is very "normal." He's not intelligent, much less uses information from the future for great revolutions. He's simply an "ordinary" person who, with his life experience, tries to make a difference. There is no such thing. A "system" is absolutely everything, and it's built with a lot of effort, so for me, it's a positive point.
Now, I'll talk about two negative points: "time" and "geography." First, we have no idea of the exact "date" of the work, nor how many days or months pass. The only information is that 1/3 of the chapter could be one day. Furthermore, regarding the location, we have no idea where the MC's village is, much less if it's Chinese. The only concrete information is that they use "Yuan." The cuisine is Asian, but even then, it could be an alternate universe. We have no information about the world, almost nothing about the village. The MC spends a lot of time at sea, and with that, the worst situation arises: this work is extremely slow. Many gave up reading it before even reaching the halfway point, so I can't recommend it to everyone. I advise reading it as a secondary work without much expectation.
Man I feel like he became a stupid ass moron after becoming a star god. Instead of trying to understand he's so called path, he's just going with the flaw and being a fucking fool drowning in he's so called advantage by having a wider path. Mind you he already has confrontations with several aeons. It's like he is trying his best to be isolated and ganged up.
He doesn't even think anymore. Its the dendro archon that keeps on thinking and strategizing for him. It's like seeing a fool holding all the infinity stones but just tries to chew on them and see if its breakable, and its not out of fun or research for knowledge, no its because he's a fucking fool.
- there is a lot of imposed plot here🤦♂️
- Oh, he is a soul master, but he develops like in some video game🧐
- The world of Soul Masters, but the author simply ignores him, meditation? common sense? no, this is just nonsense....👏👏
Let's just remember that the Author completely ignored the rules of the Soul Lord world, this completely killed the continuation of reading this story, defeating Soul Beasts aged 10,000 to 30,000, what nonsense is this? (he's only level 40 without a soul ring) This idiotic Author clearly didn't take into account the cost of soul power and the very quality of Spirit Power that is at levels 40 and 70!! 🤣🤣🤣, it's just the awesome power of the Main Character and his Pokemon that doesn't work as a Battle Soul in this world. He gets Immortal Herbs very easily, his development as a Soul Lord is just like in a video game, here you just level up by defeating the enemy and get Battle Points🤔🤔.
Overall, a lazy story that clearly doesn't deserve 5 points✌️✌️
Be mindful of the following mistranslation:
1. Vashian (瓦希安) means Breton in most cases. In ch1, Mc is a Vashian, a half elf and half human from high rock... That's the Breton lore.
2. Vashian Spell (瓦希安法术) Likely means Vancian Magic. Author referencing Vancian Perk in Ordinator Mod, which gives you spell slots that replenish on rest rather than Magicka. This itself is a reference to Jack Vance's fantasy novels, that use such system of magic casting.
As for the review. Mc is too gullible and somewhat naivelly idiotic, the kind that get his ass in trouble and is saved by plot armor wvery time — he is pathetically weak, literally saved by plot armor in every major fight, even minor ones.
The entire plot s "MC could only choose to do this insert-event or face trouble from insert-excuse"
I also disliked the kingdom building. Would have been way better as a "single player rpg" story rather than a town builder
Furthermore, I really dislike when a woman joined the traveling MC and the author put a note "hehehe, the first female heroine appeared" why are you talking like that? And "first" is this a harem garbage... Again?
Lastly, this entire novel hijacks TES to virtue signal from a moral high ground, constantly bombarding us how the MC is superior froma 21st-century-freedom-loving and people-loving nation and how he hates those that abuse the people. Just stfu and write the story! Although it feels amateurish rather than intentional propaganda, it remains annoying nevertheless.
I'm only reading this because there isn't another TES novel here
I hate this novel, from the beginning i read it i understand that if the plot doesn't let the protagonist hurr once this novel will completely destroyed, that's why i hate this novel, the MC is stupid, why i say he is stupid ? Because the template of the MC is an asahi protagonist, look at what the MC do since beginning, he Follow kasugamioka and eriri like a bitch, he doesn't even have his own standard, and suddenly he agreed to create the group to kato megumi, the author force the plot to hurt the MC, i don't why the author was a kind of bastard that think every people have M tendency, i hate a writer that make his MC a play of game or amusment, if you want to write a novel, let your MC life his full, don't force the plot, you can add reason or you can let the situation force the MC to do something he doesn't like, but to force a major plot without logic is like saying we reader just a stupid animal that only need to read what you give us, this is why i hate every novel that force the MC without logic
Very good. Someone request a source change for this to get the last few TLed please! One of my first reborn harem novels and this was a good entry. MC and the heroines are reborn but dont know that the other is reborn and instead of the MC being all "now I want them all" and heroines being "he is the only one for me" there are more nuances and that leads to interesting interactions between the cast which is the meat of this book. Recommended if you are looking for reborn harem.