It's boring but i stuck it out just so i can see his amazing MS power and finally it was revealed...
Left eyes - Izanagi for few seconds (but cool down is 1 year after use.)
Right eyes - Amplification, can increase any one thing like ninjustu, speed, strength for upto 10% (But can only use once a day, and only one thing at a time) Meaning if he boost his fireball then only that single fireball attack get 10% boost, not all ninjustu and after that he's out.
One of the most stupid and useless MS ability i've seen in fiction so far. Just throw out that MS and use plug and play izanagi like danzo they'd be 10x better.
it's impossible to give a novel a serious read where the mc's name is "Dick"
Going great, then suddenly boom chinese racism, go figure. Thank god i changed china to a different term and renamed everything they're being racist towards as china that made more sense lol
It's actually kinda good. Better than 95% compared to stuff out there.
The writing is good there's no watery content, no Chinese idealism, although the face slapping crap is used and reused at least it's not overused to the point you get sick. But it is too damn slow paced. He has to carry the whole family himself, unlike others protagonist who would venture alone in the mountain on a grinding spree; this MC cultivates one night at a time. The parents are only present to discourage the MC expressing only negative comments not adding positivity in the slightest. And when "guest" arrive at the family they are even present in the meeting just to discourage him in public?
Very enjoyable. Has all my favourite aspects- System,
Invincibility,
Logical characters,
No over face slapping,
Single female lead who remains relevant,
Decisive mc who values past relationships,
Can scheme well,
Proper ending with almost all plot points resolved,
Family development and interesting storyline with a new approach (although some of the chapters are a bit boring it’s definitely worth reading).
It was very good at the start but it progressive get worse...
1 - He won't kill named characters from Leaf Village. They will scheme against him, break promises, use every despicable thing, and he will catch and release them for --- reasons. Three times with Sanin, twice with Hiruzen, and that too in just the first 50 chapters.
2. It turned into a xianxia farce where the MC will limit his own power like he won't use chakra, he won't use poison, he won’t use ---, and if you can beat him, you win. Just to lengthen the fight time limit. I hate these kinds of stupid fights, they add nothing to the story except showing off with a braindead IQ.
I’m reading fanfic because I’m so tired of xiaxia ffs. If you bring in a young master, a faceslap, cultivation, or any other stupid trope from there then I’m gonna lose it for sure.
I have always liked and have read most of this author's novels and he has been writing for a really long time focusing on fan fiction.
The story is about a mixed anime world based on MC being a devil from Highschool DxD with evil pieces so he reincarnates girls from different anime as of chapter 49 he only has Yukinoshita Yukino (Oregairu) and Yuuki Asuna (SAO). In the latest chapter it seems like Kasumagaoka Utaha (Saekano) will also become his servant.
Yes, the novel is well written, no denying that. But I hate forced relationships in stories.
The MC keeps getting tied into relationships and obligations he never chose: he picks a random girl from the flood just because she held his leg and called him “brother”; a disciple from a 3,000 academy drags him into recruitment without asking if he wants in; a princess becomes his maid purely because “she will be useful in the future.” Now he’s stuck with lifelong bonds to senior brothers and sisters he never asked for, enrolled in a school he never wanted, and making enemies with strangers all because he escaped a flood and wanted somewhere safe to stay. It’s all so cliché, things just keep happening to him and he has no control.
What makes it worse is the MC himself. He’s passive and melodramatic, always shrugging “oh well” instead of objecting and saying ‘No!’ To things happening. That lack of backbone makes the whole story frustrating to read. Personally, I prefer an MC who’s decisive in actions, decisive in decisions, decisive in killing, ruthless, cold, and a loner not tied down by love or familial relationships someone with no attachments who actively shapes their fate. That kind of protagonist is far more interesting to me than someone who drifts and lets things happen because of “fate” or whatever.
Good grammar and sentence structure don’t save a plot that feels manufactured. All this nonsense happens in just 40 chapters and I haven’t even gotten into the ridiculously clichéd duke’s mansion subplot. I can already see more of the same ahead, and I’m not interested in following it.
I'm not gonna lie, I didn't expect to come for the harem and stay for the power system and world building. This is way better than it sounded. Gotta soldier through the first couple chapter but everything changes after the spar with Leonhart.
The only issue I have is how many forced misunderstandings there are. He's coincidentally seen with a girl, coincidentally heard saying something ambiguous then they coincidentally touch, while coincidentally another girl passes by and then rumors spread and then he coincidentally doesnt explain well, its not enough to ruin the story but it's a bit much.