Interesting concept. I liked that he was forced to be a villain. Then came canon girls. He became so lustful. Yes I hate harems (because they are rarely well written) but I soldiered through. Suddenly there's a marriage alliance with a 13 years old Gu Xun'er (all while ignoring that she should already be crazy for Xiao Yan who took advantage of her when she was a kid). Come on, have some limits.
I really wanted to continue reading and see what he would do in the Great Thousand Worlds but I'm fed up for now.
Not bad. I don't know where his power system come from so most of it feel like ass pulls to me (especially since it's so different of the ninja world power systems). Also he falls in every damn obvious ambushes without preparation.
I don't see what I was expecting from a Capone Bege fanfic in this (as in Mafia style). Usual power creep and just going from interaction to interaction with 'famous' characters.
3.2 ⭐
Great read. I recommend it.
I personally had some problems with this though:
- all the parts about Zhu Zuqing (and other girls in a lesser manner); it's like the author wanted to write a harem novel at some points but fortunately abstained
- his subordinates got god inheritances way too easily; yes I know it was the same in the original (I didn't like it either) but there I could at least call nepotism and blatant corruption
- all in all a little too lucky for my taste.
Good read I definitely recommend it.
But some things said in this novel bothered me very much. Like Kushina is a good mother then proceed to give all the reasons she isn't. Or Itachi, the stupid genocidal maniac being worthy of admiration. It's like saying Obito is worthy of admiration. So dumb. And Hashirama having contingency plans. He is as dumb as Naruto. It would be more believable to say Tobirama had prepared them used Hashirama power. Fortunately all these sh*t didn't affect the actions taken.
And what is this bullcrap about Naruto giving Naruto the adamantine chains. He was not cheated enough for you already?
3⭐ normally
Lost 1 star for sending Goku away and not taking Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz back right away. Another star for harem I'm seeing coming thousands kilometers away and bad writing in general.
Also with such a big cheat why is he so slow to get strong. He already has more grinding time in 60 chapters than the OG in their entire lives.
Like someone else already said, Universe 7 Saiyan are vicious killers Barddock included. There may be some outliers but for the most part they're savages. I do like the ideas of building a civilization from them and raising the universe index but I'd have preferred if they were progressively changed. And what about these kneeling, big brother, uncle shit?