Had a good story became way to focused on the adult aspect completely talking away from the actual interesting parts of the novel

Not terrible unsure why it has undead in the title tho

Interesting story so far only problem is the author constantly having everyone praise ling, if that bs was cut out all of the chapters would be a third shorter. Also the incessant arguing is so annoying it’s like listening to early team 7 but cranked up by 5. 80% talking 20% combat smh didn’t expect a slice of life Edit from 4/5 to 2/5 We’re at the climax of lings plan where multiple shinobi clans are waring and not a single fight has been written every one has been skipped over, after all the hoopla the author went on about ling being some warmongering freak and we don’t even get to read it smh. It’s one thing to be bad at writing fights so you invest more time into the dialogue aspect of ur story but when that aspect is just as bad why even write a story at that point. I’ve have never read a story that had this repetitive of dialogue the minute [insert character] walks in I know exactly how the convo is gonna go, hashirama is still the stupid idiot that can’t do anything right and keeps putting himself in danger, Kenji is still the fight hunger face blind idiot that cry’s a lot, etc etc like they’re interactions never changed at all throughout the story. And don’t even get me started about the gay jokes bc they are non stop ling yi madara hashirama izuma tobirama yang keji etc etc there are soooooo many sexual innuendos that the author throws around that it’s tiring to read. At this point I just skip through most of the chapters to get to the relevant info bc it’s not worth it to waste my time reading the same scene of tobirama yelling at hashirama for the 8th time

OK, I’m changing my rating I liked it at the beginning but as the story went on, the combat started to slip and become almost nonexistent. The acquisition of talent became a bit absurd with the MC constantly finding new very talented people and not having to use much effort to acquire them and it’s not like these people are double agents these people are like very very loyal to the MC like spider for example. they’re very quick shift in mindset is odd tbh, but besides the combat slipping, I find it very weird that we are still heavily focused on weapon innovation but yet we don’t ever really get to see it used in natural combat. I don’t like how the whisperer is being sidelined and not explored much like I just realized that the MC whisper joint got upgraded so now he can have a bunch more live corpses but yet he hasn’t gone back to the silent wall to get more even though his manner is short-staffed I find that a bit weird. Overall, I don’t particularly like how the story is becoming more dialogue focused instead of a mix of combat with a bit of kingdom building in governance. I don’t really like how the plot feels like it’s getting farther and farther away from the manor, even though the author would have you suspect that the manor is gonna get invaded or its gonna be attacked even tho like almost every single organization in the world Won’t touch the manor because they’re under the infernal baron and the locust have come to an agreement

Where do I even start? This is probably the only novel that I genuinely couldn’t get into while I’ve read other fanfics in the one piece universe ,like one of the best fanfics I’ve ever read was called one piece system and I think it was fucking amazing,for this one I just couldn’t. it had such an amazing two or three chapters though and I’m so sad to see how the story unfolded, the first three chapters are a perfect introduction to a cold callous and somber MC but instead what we got was the very traditional handsome Chinese novel MC with a very shounen personality/charisma sprinkle in the obligatory random girls calling him handsome constantly. I personally don’t like how the mc opened up so easily and became a normal person I felt like he should’ve stayed enclosed in his bubble, it felt worse given just how visceral those first two chapters are so to see him open up so fast just rub me the wrong way.the other problem That I have with this novel is that when the MC joins the Marines you kind of assume he’s joining it because he now has some newfound motivation to become the arbiter of justice but yet he joins the Marines under akainu who’s probably in some aspects worse than a pirate And he’s working under the world government, even though he unlike everybody else actively knows how shit the world government is, but that really isn’t pointed out on top of the fact that it kind of feels like their trying to paint the marines out as to be all standup dudes when it’s like if you read actual one piece that’s not true everybody is grey so it’s just very confusing at what he’s trying to get by join the Marines I’m not too sure, and this is why I personally feel that Had he been a cold and callous person it would’ve made more sense for him to join the marine because at that point, he doesn’t really care about justice and the truthest of senses what he wants is revenge on the pirates what they did to his village. Overall don’t think it’s bead I just could get into.

Pretty good the only problems I have with the novel are the pov changes it’s not that there bad it’s that the author will start a pov change and end it once he thinks the reader has seen enough the biggest example is when the church realizes they can’t go into the mushroom forest so they say “we’ll go to the next layer to look for clue of the vampires and investigate the changes in the dungeon” but instead of us reading they’re findings or getting to see what the leader is going to write in her report the pov cuts back to the mc and its not like the author writes about how the church’s people walked past the layer 6 forest and the mc saw them nope they kinda just disappear from the dungeon, even tho for all intents and purposes they should be on the same layer as the MC. it hurts a bit more when the chapters are so small so it’s kinda like why didn’t he just write about that, Also bc the cut happened I don’t think we’re gonna see her write the report only the effects that come from the report which is a missed opportunity to write more about how the world is starting to view the mc and the changes he’s bringing. Last problem is the story feels a bit slow at times like we know in universe time is passing really fast but it still feels like the characters are doing that same thing at times. I do like that unlike other novels this one has a good mix of male and female side characters around the mc wit Norris and Dylan being pretty interesting characters whereas in other novels it’s women everywhere and there’s always the looming “is the mc gonna start a harem?”. Overall good novel

Very good but got bored during volume 4, wasn’t very interested in where the plot was going and the slice of life side of the story was becoming a bit repetitive personally, also the time skips during that volume were very frequent and long which made my already lacking enthusiasm for another emotional side character fall even lower. The fights could use a bit of work tbh there very short and lack impact which sucks given that volume 1 and 2 are during the ancient Pokémon era where Pokémon fought and killed each other and then even in the later more modern times the fights still feel lackluster imo. Overall I like the novel and would recommend it, also the story already explains why the MC lost to that beedrill in volume 2 he was 10 lvls under and the Pokémon had a lord title, or head title I can’t remember, the story’s combat system is a bit different than in the games so don’t read this thinking by game combat logic or your gonna be disappointed,

overall I like the novel I think the biggest problem that I’m having right now which is causing me to lose quite a bit of interest in continuing to read it is the MC constantly taking inventions and gadgets from earth, and not trying to splice them together with magic or try to upgrade them with this world’s materials I think just giving this information as is is very annoying to me personally and it adds salt on the wound when he gets touted as this genius when he’s just plagiarizing from actual smart geniuses in real life. I usually don’t practically care when this type of thing happens in novels but at the point where I’m at it’s a big plot point and a big point of the story where he has to keep giving out inventions to his mech teacher, so that his teacher can have a higher standing in society so that he can get a bigger backing and I just don’t like it. he’s not fixing the invention, he’s not making them better, He’s not upgrading them, He’s not like just giving like the brief spark notes of it so that he can give his teacher inspiration so that the teacher can make it. It’s just he’s literally copying and pasting the invention one to one, and as I said, I don’t like it. The last thing I took problem to in this novel is the lack of infinite flow in the novel, even though I assumed or I thought this was supposed to be an infinite flow type story so far it’s only been one character from a different IP that’s been summoned and while we do see different gadgets From other IPS they only happen when he gets on the night carriage and the night carriage doesn’t come that often with a new gadgets so overall, I just wished I had to see more infinite flow from the infinite flow story

Actually fucking terrible. As a story it sucks and as a power fantasy system resurgence novel it’s even worse. I genuinely do not understand why anybody likes this novel and I particularly don’t feel like wasting my energy writing out a review for it, but I’ll give some of the stuff I hate. One of the biggest problems with this novel is that the MC’s hate for humanity makes no sense. We have been shown by the fact that he still keeps his human name, but the fact that he still wanted to check up on China even after he reincarnated and by how he talks about how he had a loving family in both lives so it doesn’t really make much sense why he hates humanity this much, especially given that he didn’t stay in isolation for very long so it wasn’t like he was insane, but for some reason the moment he gets out of captivity. he just decides to slaughter everybody, even the tourist that didn’t do anything. The bigger problem that I have with this novel is that with resurgence novels, there’s a template that you can do that can make a half decent one, but yet this author decided to go completely left and not even do a good job at it like the whole him killing a bunch of humans doesn’t make much sense because he says “oh yeah humans won’t let the dinosaurs live in peace” but he’s making a self fulfilling prophecy given that he’s attacking the humans first when they haven’t even touched him by therefore aggravating humans and making them retaliate against him, had he just left the humans alone he would’ve probably been treated just like Godzilla and wouldn’t have been attacked but instead he completely raises North America he sinks Japan. Europe gets attacked by a kaiju and gets completely turned into hell and the only real country or continent that’s left is China, which is the not so subtle nationalism in the novel which is pretty apparent at the beginning when it says there’s a war between the dinosaurs and the humans when it’s pretty much just the USA versus the dinosaurs. Overall shit novel would’ve given it a zero

This story can be described in 2 words boring and underwhelming. it’s very obvious that the author is inexperienced when it comes to writing and for this type of story is pretty obvious, even tho he literally laments he’s lack of skill in the authors notes almost every chapter, the constant underwhelming finishes to built up events, the lack of proper fights for the mc, the dumb short cuts the mc keeps getting, etc etc. honestly the only thing I was really looking forward to as the story went on was seeing how the mc’s dragon form changed and I can’t even get that besides getting bigger he doesn’t get anymore lava dragon traits. Lack of proper fights. throughout the story the mc never takes a fight he’ll lose or even get badly injured, like when he takes on the Merfolk at the cat island besides the fact that there was barely a fight there bc he lured them into the volcano and collapsed it on them when it came to fighting the kraken beast he hid and got saved by a random roc that was summoned by an evil cult Early on in the story the author introduces a mad scientist that wants to transfer his soul into a dragon, we get multiple chapters wit updates on how he’s doing wit his experiments til boom he runs into Nina and kidnaps her to test on now you’d think the author would have the mc find the lair and have a big battle in the city wit the scientist but no we don’t, the mc doesn’t get there in time and the thing that kills that scientist is a random charm that Nina was given by an elven girl the chapter earlier the only reason that scientist existed was to make Nina a full dragon and given her a tier 6 mages inheritance that’s it. Well okay there wasn’t a big fight well at least when the mc saved Nina from the nobles we’ll get a cool escape from the city chapter NOPE we get a 24 hours later and a recap of the events that’s it. Then the elven Forrest astro plane war holy that was done terrible. Overall as I said, the story is boring and very underwhelming could’ve been better, but the author is unskilled