this idiot author thinks that the mc can ask for any ninjutsu and he will get it easily, like he wants tsunade's regeneration technique, just ask, want minato's teleportation technique? just ask. it completely ruins my impression, the author makes no effort on this level, it's absurd, might as well give it to him directly by a cheater, or instead of doing it in such a stupid way, shit.

edit (137): The novel has a huge problem: its world is empty. The human world is pointless. Human players are useless (except for a short episode where the MC committed a massacre…). Other than that, this part of the story serves no purpose. In the game, he only levels up without any challenge. It's fun to read at first, but in the end, it goes nowhere. The cycle is always the same: he farms, he gets blocked by a class quest, he completes it, unlocks even more overpowered talents, and repeats. Everything is handed to him on a silver platter: Divine assistance that helps him. NPCs willing to work for him for almost nothing (and soon, players too). The game world is just as empty as the human world. The MC doesn’t follow the game’s quests. He only grinds monsters and bosses on repeat. In the end, the MC is the only thing that exists in this novel. Everything else is just background noise. It’s like watching a streamer play a hack-and-slash, and the chat is just the novel’s characters worshipping the MC while watching him play. ----------------- Je suis venu pour un OP MC (oubliez la partie vengeance, quand j’ai lu ses raisons, je n’avais qu’une seule pensée : ÇA LE SERT BIEN !). Je peux accepter beaucoup de choses dans un roman sur la réalisation de souhaits, mais il y a une chose que je refuse absolument de tolérer : tordre la logique à l’extrême juste pour donner au MC une compétence ou un talent qui recrée quelque chose qui existe déjà dans la vraie vie. Soyons réalistes, nous savons tous que le MC va être surpuissant. Alors pourquoi diable l’auteur fait-il tout son possible pour rendre les banques aussi ridicules ? Histoire de faire briller encore plus le MC ? C’est tout simplement stupide.

This novel is completely stupid. I know it's a wish-fulfillment novel, and I have no problem with that—I came here exactly for that. But even a novel of this kind must follow a minimum set of rules. You want girls to fall in love with the MC? No problem, he's overpowered, which can attract women. You want to make him invincible? No worries, he has a system that does it for him. I can understand why many people admire it, but what I don't understand is why the author sabotages his own MC—more than once. He watches his friend get massacred and just stands there, enjoying the show instead of acting immediately to save him before he's seriously injured. But no, he prefers to let his friend go through all that suffering before stepping in because "it looks cooler." But to me, it's not cool—it's just stupidity. He notices that the difficulty of a dungeon has increased several times over, putting all the students participating in it in danger. Logically, he should react, but no, he says nothing. Yes, the author does this to highlight the MC’s power, but he could showcase it without sacrificing characters needlessly—especially when the MC has already noticed the danger. These are just a few examples among many others… Just because it's a wish-fulfillment novel doesn't mean it shouldn't follow at least a minimum of logic. There are thousands of ways to make an MC look cool while still keeping at least a reasonable level of intelligence. Because instead of seeing him as an exceptional and impressive character, I can only see him as a fool. Here's my verdict on this novel: it's a story without intelligence.

the author writes too much filler or point where the mc takes second place for several chapters, to tell us about the life of rondome, who will be forgotten right after without it adding anything to the story, and it's too boring. and the author likes to have women revolve around the mc, even when he was a tiger monster, it's abused to what point he can't write without adding a woman to his side every second. in short, too much useless filler, and the author clearly has no fucking idea how to write about a monster mc.

I don’t see the point of making the MC invincible if he barely has any screen time. The further the story progresses, the less present he becomes—to the point where, after the first 100 chapters, seeing him once every 30 to 50 chapters is already an achievement. On top of that, the plot keeps repeating the same formula, just scaled up: a new kingdom, a new existential threat, an army struggling to survive... The author doesn’t even try to introduce fresh ideas, making the story feel dull and predictable. In the end, what’s the point of reading about an invincible MC if we spend 99% of the time following his subordinates struggling? It’s no longer a story about an all-powerful protagonist, but rather about a bunch of side characters constantly in crisis. It’s a waste of time and a massive loss of potential

at the beginning the mc used these pokemons intelligently, then later he only used those of rank S, even for ridiculous things, and the worst each time he frees his aura to tell everyone how strong he is, in short he lost his subtlety which was not already his strength, but there it is or point it is ridiculous.