(Momonosuke must die!!!)

-1★: Because the novel has been discontinued. -2★: Because the author is following the same path as Luffy's crew, and especially because of the stupid character who always rushes in headfirst and gets himself into trouble every time. There's also the endless nerfing the author imposes on the characters, as well as the near-total lack of development of the Devil Fruits they acquire. It's all well and good to have 30 or 100 Devil Fruits, but if their use remains at a beginner's level, you might as well not include them at all. Proper development of a Devil Fruit is about as useful as a fireball from an apprentice mage who's only capable of lighting a campfire..

Wish Fulfillment

Il ne sait rien de l’histoire de Nami, mais ce foutu auteur l’écrit en nous racontant l’histoire de Nami, bon sang, pourquoi ne la maîtrises-tu pas mais tu dis quand même des conneries -3* modifier -555555555555555555* !!!!!!!!!!!! The author has never read One Piece, he has a stupid wiki, he mixes everything up and throws out this nameless crap.

The author ruined their novel in less than 10 chapters. To believe that a malnourished 10-year-old child, just recovering from an injury, could defeat such a beast and throw stones weighing about half a kilogram over 15 meters, hitting on the first try—even if he was a complete mess before his rebirth—is insulting to the reader’s intelligence. If there were superpowers in this world, I might call it magic, but a “normal” kid doing this is just mocking the audience. Take a star and turn it into a spaceship, author. After all, a ten-year-old managed to take down a dinosaur; it shouldn’t be that hard for you, thirty-somethings.