I will give it a 4 star for now. I like the idea and the execution. The only thing holding this book back is the fact that they censored every sex scene( and they have plenty sex so far) and that it's not being updated. Only at chapter 300 plus while faloo is 500 plus. Gonna wait till it gets updated....

It's not bad, but a little boring I guess. But Soul King is wrong about one thing. Hulks enemy is in the MCU, in the new Captain America Falcon movie. As for his other points. They were pretty spot on to be honest.

Boring, just kingdom building. Which I know most of you guys like, but there's barely any good fights or action.

It's not bad. I've been fixing names the entire time to make it better for myself and I've been enjoying it so far. One thing you should know, the Mc isn't like others that don't care about innocent lives, you can see him actually fight to lessen the damage to his surroundings and protect civilians. He also changes the plot logically. He's not that op like that other ben 10 fanfic that has control of alien X, but he's still OP. Edit. Admittedly, i am a bit annoyed about some dumb things that the MC does for the sake of plot...but its bearable. The original plot Ideas make up for it.

Pretty good. Gonna let chapters build for a while.

It seems fine, didnt really catch my attention though. The main character is strong at the start, but then starts teaching people chakra refinement, i thought he would atleast have something that kept him unique. Also, he gave fugaku itachis eyes. Gving him a ems, which is fine i guess, but he doesnt even have one yet.

I wanted to give this th8ng a chance cause the idea was cool, but it was a huge disappointment. Spent 200 years and couldn't even make a stable rasengan, then spent decades again....with him having mastered many different rasengan...but then shows him getting excited over finally having a rubber ball to practice rasengan!? How does that make sense!? Keep in mind he also supposedly had supreme chakra control now, but can't do simple shit like that. Tajima also seems to have manhakyou sharringan. Completely stupid .

It's pretty good. It's just the last 4 chapter's words were all put in the wrong order. One moment he's talking to kurenai the next he's fighting Danzo, the next he's in ben sleeping... If the updated chapters are the same I don't have any hope for this novel.

Honestly...its not even the translation thats the problem. It's being slowly but surley fixed. But the story seriously sucks....or rather the way it's written. Like someone said...seems like it was written by a kid....the Author speed runs through everything...theres no description of who looks like what....no inner dialogue...just plain. Still have to give atleast 4stars for ben 10....need more...maybe we'll get a good one some day. Edit. Kinda like it now. Just had to get used to the first few chapters. Changed to 5 stars. Edit. Gonna take a break for now, let tge chapters build. Would be good if he traveled to otger universes like dc or marvel.

Very good