Overall it is good some place just need to adjust like the scaling of their power system and the later part 400+ chap it is more on storytelling on various worlds not the main characters ithinks just using it for word count

I thought the first few chapters is good but the MC is kind of stupid and talk too much the chapter is being dragged for too long a 7 days mission it takes yo like 20- 30 chapters most of it is just him talking nonsense I thought it might improve after the next mission but still the same the world background is good just the story need to be adjusted especially the mc

I thought it was good at first but what happen to power scaling? The ability? It is almost a wish fulfilment novel Still this hits different Cant describe how I feel You judge on your own

Very good novel the combination of powers is quite good but the MC needs to have a bit more brain especially creating or enhancing his technique Need more world hopping and different cultivation methos

Very good novel portraying the style of kizaru just the later part 200 chaps kind of dragging the chapter too much details

Very first chapter is already trash like you cause trouble you run you get caught you bark like a dog to escape haysssssss