The writing style is good. But the story has a lot of plot holes. Overall very bland start.

The mc cheat basically makes him invincible and he cannot be harmed. This takes out all the fun and suspense as strength of enemies no longer matter.

Too slow paced. A little too much filler.

One of the worst starting for a novel. In 6 chapters he tells everything about rebirth to his family. BS about country being great and helpful from chapter 2. This novel is a complete waste.

It has a lot of problems. MC tells others about his system. His system specially gifted him civilisation’s division's but suddenly every small and big civilisation knows it. Also throwing numbers like trillions in face all the time. The logistics for such an army would be a nightmare.

This is a good novel until chapter 920. Then system starts doing random stuff on its own and forcing mc into deadly situations without his consent. I hate when system just takes over instead of helping mc.