[Make up for regrets + Relaxed + The protagonist starts with Fontaine + The novel starts with Mondstadt, because it’s too slow to write about Fontaine just according to the plot, I can’t wait]
[Spoilers for the original characters in the future, spoilers are not only for the main line]
Mondstadt
Barbara: Lord Wind God is a drunkard? In that case…
Rosaria silently watched Barbara run away, and soon, Barbara came back with a bottle of wine in her hand.
“Lord Barbatos, I offer you the wine.”
A gust of wind swept up and took the wine away.
“Wait! Bartobas!” Rosaria reacted, the bottle of wine seemed to be her private collection?
——————
Liyue
“The Rock King was assassinated? How is it possible!?” Keqing couldn’t believe what was written in the book.
“Oh, guest official, you really know a lot.” Hu Tao wanted to stick the book on Zhongli’s face.
“Master… I can’t see it like this…”
——————
Inazuma
“The ability to predict the future? Isn’t this a denial of eternity? Show it to Ying.” Yae Shinko smiled.
“The enemy of eternity must be eradicated!” Lei Yingying said in a cold tone.
“Why is it interrupted in a place like this!?” The story stopped when the protagonist was pulled into the Pure Land of One Heart by the
Thunder God. Yae Shinko nodded with satisfaction.
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Sumeru
Sumeru F4 gathered together, a total of three people, Elhaisen didn’t come.
But in the end they still got four people together, and Cole came.
“The Order Court…” Now it’s-the Grand Disciplinary Officer Seno!
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Fontana
Via knew the truth about her father’s incident in advance and reconciled with Clorinde. Funina
finally found someone to talk to, and it was a rare relaxation.
At first it was more like 5 stars then the current chapter 70 is so idiotic that sky island has a road poneglyph even though it just a poneglyph pointing to ancient weapon.. The road poneglyphs are either at the 2nd half of grandline(new world), not at 1st half, sky island is still at 1st half. Is the author idiot, a good fanfic became a mess
I would have given 4-5 stars but the super stupidity of ML after upgrading to demon god realm is too much of a waste especially since it is Zhonglis template. At chapter 161, Surtr or Laevatain went to see the ML but missed him so trouble happened with texas and ML cronies(Mudrock and others), then when ML came back happened to see Surtr confront Mudrock but the idiocy of ML provoked the laevatain sword of Surtr and didn't let go so the sword rampaged, he even captured Surtr instead of throwing her away while dialogue of ML is about retiring but instead keeps himself going to troubles. What a fucking hypocrite shit, this really annoyed me, so I quit this shit... Even some sentences or words are different from past chapters like some costs and wages. For example the wages of Mudrock while working for Lin was 100k then misplaced/became 150k then 200k because author keeps adding something.. For me this is too overrated, what a waste of Zhongli template.. Zhongli is a wise person and expert at avoiding troubles but the author wasted it... I know it just a template but i didn't like the ML or author destroying my image of Zhongli as a Genshin impact gamer and fan... So this is trash for me.
Please don't overrate, the ML has the Imaginary Tree which should have the all the powers of all games and manga related to Imaginary tree which are Genshin Impact,all Honkai Impacts, Honkai Star Rail and ZZZ.
Just from Honkai Star Rail, he can/should already have some initial powers of some Aeons(star gods) which should have made him already powerful, from Honkai Impact 3 if the ML has imaginary space which is possesed by Herrscher of void why does he have none of other initial powers of other 14 or more Herrschers, while from genshin impact he can also get the elemental and abyss powers which he can also give others. This author doesn't really have information about imaginary tree. He just treats it as a tree but the "imaginary tree is something like a multiverse" , okay?!?!?!?!?!?!? The universe of earth from honkai impact, the universe where teyvat of genshin impact and the many worlds of honkai star rail and etc.... What a useless author, other readers, please don't overrate if you don't even know about imaginary tree..
This fanfic so long winded, there so much explanations occupying a chapter. In 317 translated chapters, only less than 3 months passed since ML got the diary. The ML keeps saying many times that there are 20 people at the 1st batch of diary readers but keeps adding people instead of clarifying the 2nd batch of diary readers were only 3 people(Yuuko, Haruhi and the side character from Jujutsu) was currently introduced. Even if there was a list of 1st and 2nd batch of diary readers(at the list of 1st batch you could see Busujima Saeko but you couldn't even see her appearance in any chapter) , by not integrating them into the plot because the author keeps adding long winded nonsense just made it drop a star rating from me. The diary even became a mess because the ML seperated the 1st and 2nd batch diary readers even though there was no difference in what he writes and lated he even just copy paste what he writes to 1st batch into 2nd batch diary readers. Even though there was a group chat for 1st batch diary readers, there was none for 2nd batch. The author lack of attention to 2nd batch really is a minus for me, the author keeps adding 1 after another different anime world view but he keeps forgetting about the 2nd batch even though its already been more than 1 month since the 2nd batch diary readers came to be. I would voted 1 star because other gave an overrated rate but for me, this fanfic really is 2-3 stars.
I think this is too overrated by others, at first you can say its 4-5 stars but later chapters keeps dragging on and ML is too weak even though he got a sign in system at the age of 10. At my current read chapter, the ML is 17-18 but from my perspective he is too weak because the author keeps giving nonsense rewards. The shadow clone jutsu is even changed by author making up their own personality(especially a gay/girly clone who seduces sabo). The rewards gotten by ML at early chapters seems reasonable at first but later it just made the mc weak because the author really gives random useless rewards. Theres even a fairy tale fruit made up by author where theres an original random enemy side character(more like a filler plot) not needed for a fanfic. The later chapters keeps getting weirder and weirder. The ML is more like an protagonist than luffy because the navy or world government keeps disregarding him even though he killed a celestial dragon and escaped marineford execution. From the current chapter I read, this fanfic became more like 1-2 stars so I gave 2 stars since I enjoyed it at the start.
Just 23 chapters and there was already an info error, the diamond fruit was already eaten by jozu from whitebeard pirates... What a trash fanfic, it was a good idea of summoning anime characters but became trash because of useless author
I initially wanted to give 4 stars because after ML defeated Imu from One piece world, he went to another world which is the Demon Slayer world, a weak world. It made me disappointed so much but since I really like this one piece fanfic... I gave it 5 stars, only until 388 is one piece world i guess..
Very good fanfic, making changes while adapting to the current latest chapter of one piece. Only wano arc was so weird that it made me have the urge to slap the author for nearly ruining this fanfic.
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3.8 (6 reviews)[Make up for regrets + Relaxed + The protagonist starts with Fontaine + The novel starts with Mondstadt, because it’s too slow to write about Fontaine just according to the plot, I can’t wait]
[Spoilers for the original characters in the future, spoilers are not only for the main line]
Mondstadt
Barbara: Lord Wind God is a drunkard? In that case…
Rosaria silently watched Barbara run away, and soon, Barbara came back with a bottle of wine in her hand.
“Lord Barbatos, I offer you the wine.”
A gust of wind swept up and took the wine away.
“Wait! Bartobas!” Rosaria reacted, the bottle of wine seemed to be her private collection?
——————
Liyue
“The Rock King was assassinated? How is it possible!?” Keqing couldn’t believe what was written in the book.
“Oh, guest official, you really know a lot.” Hu Tao wanted to stick the book on Zhongli’s face.
“Master… I can’t see it like this…”
——————
Inazuma
“The ability to predict the future? Isn’t this a denial of eternity? Show it to Ying.” Yae Shinko smiled.
“The enemy of eternity must be eradicated!” Lei Yingying said in a cold tone.
“Why is it interrupted in a place like this!?” The story stopped when the protagonist was pulled into the Pure Land of One Heart by the
Thunder God. Yae Shinko nodded with satisfaction.
————————
Sumeru
Sumeru F4 gathered together, a total of three people, Elhaisen didn’t come.
But in the end they still got four people together, and Cole came.
“The Order Court…” Now it’s-the Grand Disciplinary Officer Seno!
————————
Fontana
Via knew the truth about her father’s incident in advance and reconciled with Clorinde. Funina
finally found someone to talk to, and it was a rare relaxation.