At first i thought this good fan fiction until many unreasonable developments make this good story destroyed. Many women fall in love with Naruto without reason at all,this most forced by author. First dungeon is dragon slayer ( from dragon slayer manga ) ,but until i found "chakra dragon yuan" that I'm disappointed, forcing Japanese manga to Chinese is I'm absolutely hate about. At least Chinese author must respect each Japanese manga author to keep their manga as Japanese manga ,not as Chinese manga. Many people make fake reviews about this fan fiction about 5 star ,so I give it 1 star only because i hate fake.

Very stupid development in storyline. Have great prospects at first but destroyed by author itself.

At least this fan fiction is enjoyable to read,only few downside. 1) Goku always far ahead their companions, always last arrive when fight almost lose. 2) Goku have harem but almost no interaction between them,only few sentences. 3) no Goten ,no Trunks,no Marron,it's pity Goku have harem with chi chi,bulma and android 18 ,but in this novel Goku only have Gohan[From chi chi and Goku] and Bulla ( Bura / Bra )[From Bulma and Goku]. 4) I feel like this is dragon ball GT,after winning against evil dragon, story ended without beerus ( god destruction ) and whis ( angel ) appears,so this is basically GT universe.

What teacher chen,what bullsheet cultivation. So 1 star. What messed up timeline,white fang isn't dead,what bullsheet scenario author doing by gathering all died characters to make it isn't dead. 1) nawaki died in second ninja war,in this novel nawaki still alive and 7-8 years old,what stupid. 2) Kato Dan died in second ninja war ,now still alive in third ninja war but died when he and MC do missions and Kato Dan died because MC isn't capable to save it. 3) Hatake Sakumo ( shiroi kiba/white fang ) still alive in third ninja war and become commander against sunakagure. 4) reason 3rd ninja war because died of 3rd kazekage in this novel that isn't reason. And many absurd things.

Too many fillers with words count, MC already have power to instant killed enemy but author make it more than. 10 chapters full of nonsense fighting scenes 🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️

MC like nanny lolz,why not make new pirates group??? I give it 1 star because fights scene too filler ( many words count ) to read,I'm always skip fight with filler words count.

Good fan fiction, no deliberately make chapters become longer for words count. With fast ending, and no filler,so I'm pretty good reading this fan fiction.

This novel take many word to make words count,make like "too much nonsense", author make MC explain this and that,for action only glimpse chapter. If action 1 chapter then words count make it 10 chapter , so I'm only given 3 star, only if author isn't focused to make money with words count full of nonsense,then this is 5 star novel. Actually without words count alone if author have great creativity then this possible, because this not pure "Naruto" fan fiction,but fusion between "Naruto" fan fiction and "Terror infinity" fan fiction. I'm gonna explain about Terror infinity,that story about reincarnator in main god space, each season mission have to enter film or serial television to finish quests. From resident evil to next film,so you can imagine how many words count alone without so much nonsense if we hopping from 1 world to another. Our MC ( transmigator from earth that knows about anime and film ) from uciha clan,and chosen as 1 member in main god space ( terror infinity ).

This very good novel,I'm like it

Stupid fan fiction,MC like blockhead idiot, knowing trap still like useless idiots walking straight to trap,I hate most is not brave fighting,but brainless idiots knowing trap still walking straight to trap,in the end he getting caught ended in impel down,I hate author make plot armour to MC,make it like golden lion always getting free from impel down,so after read MC enter impel down,I'm not gonna read this fan fiction anymore. I hate stupid brainless MC, after getting rumble rumble fruit ,MC so cocky, before getting devil fruits so afraid this and that,so 1 star from me. Fight against garp,sengoku, zhepyr, kizaru and many navi,that not brave but plain stupid.