That was very shaky start. What's up with the Pictures inside a novel? Doing things like this shows how shallow the author thinking is, and how failed an author to describe his characters and just rely on illustrations. The author lacks the creativity in writing to bring out his artistry on the characters, the environment, the plot and entire novel itself. At chapter 21 the MC got 33 wives and concubines already. With so many novel with same genre of making wives and baby to be strong, the author failed to provide a unique blend of cultivation story that keeps the interest of readers. While reading this novel, I have a cringe feeling. The author seems to have fetish desires of bombarding the novel with tons of pictures. The novel is overcooked.

Another baby making novel

A pretty good story. A slow burn cultivation story. If you want an MC being super MC and saitama level. Well, this is not for you. Haha

Until Ch 300, most chapters are about simulations, he simulations every month [until ch 300 changes to every year] and the real world story progress was very slow. Its only the MC gotten stronger, super strong that less than 300 chapters, only less than half-year of real word time passed, and he was just 8 Years Old, and from the Body Tempering Realm, to Saint Ruler Realm (probably 9-10 levels apart) in a span of less than a year. Most of you might find it boring to read the simulations that last several chapter, but to mind you, important details of the plot is mostly related to it. If you skip the simulation chapters, you will find it very confusing to read the later chapters. I also noticed that are rougly conversation/dialogues, all narrations. Later chapters becomes boring as the simulation just taken over the entire story rather than the MC developing real-life story. Edit: reaching 500 chapter. Dropping now. Thare are many drawbacks of a Simulation novel, maybe like other novels if poorly writter, but in this case, is failed to provide a cohesive story, much more so, in keeping the readers excited and glued. Every after simulation the MC will go out and kill all the variables and enemies based from the simulation. Then when new simulation comes, everything will reset from day 1. Note that later simulations will last 100 chapters, and lasting hundreds if not million of years, imagine the frustration of reading simulations every time again and again with different story progressesion. Update till less than 500 chapter, in the real world only less than 2 years passed. Not interested anymore to care for later story.

The first 50 chapter was frustrating, especially the first two disciples, but there was somehow a character development later. As of writing, I am on Ch 180, and so far it is decent. But not excellent. Some translation problems. Story development is also interesting, a slight deviation from the usual sect-leader- babysitting -the whole sect. The author later on focuses on introducing various new charcters, new business affliations to the extent that the MC cultivation was forgotten. The MC became more of a businessman than a cultivator. Some items rewarded by the system were not useful enough, like the author just give away item prized but was not relevant enough being mentioned or used on later chapter. the author seems to have a short term memory lost to some extent. The author seems to struggle to oganize the plot development - being slow. "What I Teach you is real stuff" only happens at initial chapters, everything goes cliché later on.

Like the previous comment said, it is ED version 2.0 zero but worst. Anyway, why do most chinese novels always have a plot of, breaking up relationship kind off. A soap opera start cliché. Do chinese people have common problem with their love life? Rofl

Okay, i reached the final chapters and here are my views on this 1. The MC is OP, sanction to face the wall because of having relationship to a Demom Empress 2. MC is an Elder of Dao Sect, having immortal realm (realm of the lower world, not technically immortal realm) 3. The realm levels are confusing, the Author doesn't have a clear foresight on what realms are or what future realms would be. The author failed to state wht realms are for. Lower World has God Realm at start which is confusing. 4. Story is repetitive, the MC will just go to specific sect assigned by system to sign-in. And these scene just repeats majority of the chapters especially on later chapter. 5. Since itd repetitive, the author just slaps the same template of storytelling every chapter and everytime MC breakthrough. 6. The story has a very poor world-building. 7. The author tends to explain details all over again even the readers already know such info. 80% of every chapter are just inner monologue and explanations of the author before the plot resumes which kinda boring 8. This novel is best for readers who like fast-paced cultivation and OP MC. 9. Was also Elder and Prince of a Dynasty, and author failed to provided a captivating storytelling, kingdom-building and proper world building.

Reached the latest chapters i don't know if there are chapters beyond that, it seems the author did a time skip several times in the God Realm to hasten the plot, the latest chapters is nearing the realm where the MC has - the Eternal God Emperor Realm which he obtained in the beginning. So far no details of realm beyond that and it seems the story will be developing that in the later chapters. The story started with a quick nosedive with very poor writing and definitely will not impress readers to keep reading. It recovers in the middle of the story with interesting scene being the MC become low-key but still helping the clan ascend several realms. There were serveral side character with interesting story but with little to without further backstory as story just focused on the development of the clan. The story is not something new. You can find several novels with the same type of MC babysitting the whole clan. It is a great past time when you want a quick read. Overall the consistency of the story really matters here, and the author seems put the effort and struggle to keep it just like that.

Disappointed. This novel is just a repetitive story. Author has pig brain.

I am so confused, Su Xun is the MC, so he has the system. Then here comes some chapter where the Patriarch Su Zeduan is summoning characters. WTF making things complicated for the readers to understand. Then here comes the All-in one system, summoning, return system, sign-in system. Stupid. Another wish fulfillment.