Too messed up power system author made it look like bleach power system is superior to naruto.

Its better to count how many hairs you have to pass time then to read this.too slow. Forced plot.

Good enough to pass time. after reading have your brain checked. Mc's strength fluctuates too much in one ch he is at six paths lvl( with truth seeking balls) on other he is actually affected by limited tsukoyomi and kurama yakumos genjutsu , atleast make it consistent, a six paths lvl has enough mental energy to not be affected by even the infinite tsukoyomi. Too much irrelevant nonsense, just to make story funny author has added to many nonsensical things to it ex. ( ) anything in bracket was fine at first but it went bad because of excessive utilization. I started reading because of the concept of inner voice being heard but author only used it for first few chs so I am a bit disappointed.

Its a bit dull, but good for pass time.

Mc himself doesn't have many scenes. Too much fighting scenes, a fight that should end within 1½ chapter takes more than 4. Excessive increase of word count author instead of writing good scenes and plot focuses more on increasing word count. It gets boring after 80 chs. As others said its kingdom building but even that isn't shown how he did what is shown is never mentioned leaving a few chapters that talked and highlighted kingdom building. Mcs system is pretty much never used after first few chapters.

Too many brain cells died. At one point mc is hiding not showing his ability. At another point everyone knows about it even after mc hiding himself, what kind of brain dead mc is he or is it the author who is brain less.

Too convenient. Everything is too convenient for the mc. Author first showed mc doesn't have the talent for awakening sharingan than he conveniently placed a made up technique that can help him with his system. mc is useless with no talent. But still use his "system" to awaken sharingan. Being an Uchiha his talent for chakra is also useless. And I dunno where the fuck did this chakra refining came from.

Goog read. Good plot Good portrayal.

Too much empty hype for his character, too much show off, too much energy at every scene I dunno about others but for me its a good scenario bad execution type fic, you can't even pass time reading its too cringe, losing brain cells works for me but actually feeling cringe for the character and author after reading is a no go for me.

It has reached the level of extreme stupidity. Author hasn't analyzed the og characters personality, tobirama even if he sensed something would not take a sudden action without thinking things through, even his choice for 3rd hokage was thought out deeply here he appeared to be a mean nasty guy, author is taking the evil konoha higher up path but didn't realize how to narrate it well, instead of characters thinking it appears more that every thing is happening not because the characters want to do it but because author or rather the mc wants it to happen, leaving every thing aside, Can a hokage (tobirama/3rd hokage) really order a group of elite ninjas(anbu) to monitor single person who hasn't done anything suspicious so far.. I dunno it appears that author wanted to write but didn't plan the plot well in most fanfics plot is well thoughtout but execution is faulty here even the plot is messed up the premise itself is stupid.