4 stars to encourage the author But i can only give the novel 1 to 2 stars UP to chapter 24 : The World building is below average and lacking realism. The MC have 3 years of surviving experiences in this Doomsday world and we can barely see it: the author is too lacking The power card system is .... Hum ... Lets say if a game was using this system, none would play it : from the informations we are given, it dosnt seem well thought/constructed

4 stars to encourage the author But i cant immerse myself in the story and i can only give ONE star The magic power system and the world buidling are too lacking A shadow wizard, assassin style, attacking from his enemy shadow ... with a "3 meters 400kg sword" ..... Pure idiocy ... The MC should sing and dance while at it ...... Its frustrating when the simplest common sense is missing in a novel

The novel is better than i first expected and worth reading despite a few lacking points. Minus one star as the AI translation isnt good enought, and many parts are difficult to follow/understand Minus one star because the power levels, the abilities and skills are a mess

4 stars to encourage the author Its a 3 to 4 stars for a teenager But its a 2 to 3 stars for an older reader As of chapter 46, the power system (auras) seem broken

4 stars to encourage the author As of chapter 26, i can only give the novel 2 stars : the scenario is too lacking : The World building is barely ok The MC character is 0 star. He is un-intelligent for someone who transmigrated from the modern world ( no knowledge and no wisdom ) He live like a rich playboy, and can become stronger with his sytem if he does charity and good deeds .... But he decide to risk his life/could die and take on dangerous missions ... To growth quicker ... I dont think an adult readers can connect/understand such MC

Compared to so many others novels on this website, its a 5 stars for a teenager I can see the author is more mature and experienced But i can only give it a 3 stars for an adult reader because of the dumb/juvenile parts of the novel / also the World building is lacking and confusing To the author, if per chance, he were to read : creating a 16 years old MC ( Reborn with his 30 years old memory ) trashing 16 years old teenagerS and taking the moral high ground is "garbage" level and VERY disapointing ... Netherless, compared to the 90% "waste of time" novels, its in the 10% worth reading

4 stars to encourage the author I guess 3 to 4 stars for a teenager But its more like 2 stars for an older reader There are somes good ideas and somes dumb ones

4 stars to encourage the author Giving it 2 stars because the World building is lacking and not well thought Iam just chapter 15 and certains choices the MC made are wise and somes are dumb ... Picking up jade stones .... Selling it for millions Picking up gold sand : melting it : molding it in gold bars (a few hours of work per bars i guess) .... Selling for millions : why the bother then ? Etc ....

4 stars to encourage the author. But i give it 2 stars Despite trying to give the novel a strong realism ... Its lacking Just asking Chat GPT the differents steps for survivalism would have helped to build a much better novel The novel is also really frustrating due to the idiotic priorities of the MC/author : From day one, the MC is threatened by a pack of wolves and almost killed a few times .... And over a month later, with a few followers, they have one bow and a few agriculture tools to survive a wolf raid ... A few months later, they are attacked by bandits ... And still just one bow Despite his qualities, the novel is too defective

Giving 3 stars to encourage the author to do better .... Because the story itself IS 1 star The World building is ... Taking the readers for idiots