It's written pretty good, no major mistakes but I'm dropping because his polite behaviour is truly disgusting. It's usually fine because he's weak and should be polite to the strong and those who haven't wronged him but sometimes he's overly polite and differential which I coukd handle. But Tang San legit tried to kill him with hidden weapons in the arena so he defended himself and hurt tang san back but then he apologises no less than three times offering compensation while the author emphasises his politeness and etiquette and how noble he is. I had to drop there.