It was a very funny novel but after chapter 170 it lose its charm and i also feel bored. Flaws.... 1. Getting 10000 year old ring and showing off everywhere but nothing happened, no one ask anything. Soul land is not good for geniuses after all. 2. He buyed tang san technique higher version but he forgot most powerful one the purple demon eyes. Although it has one but it feels like for attack not for observation pr analysis. 3. His sword has weird attribute combination like ice, fire, lightning and darkness. There should be also earth, wind and light....so it would match properly. If there was space and time it would be even more powerful. 4. Where did marriage agreement between zhu zhuqing and dai mubai go. Author diliribty remove it? 5. His behaviour on having women in both arms is weirdl diconforting and feel disturbing. Like very lustful and pervert young Master. It make heroins just a tool to show off not sentient human. 6. Complete trust from flander feel weird. 7. He easily got qian renxue and bibi dong unreasonably, it just feels too fake. 8. How did xiao wu didn't discovered by dugu bo, she was not even hiding but laughing openly. 9. Distribution of immortal grass as it never apear properly. 10. Pity that there is no dugu yan in harem as in many fanfics she is one of the heroine so i subconsciously thought but at least we don't shown the lovey dovey scenes between yu tianheng and dugu yan as i would feel uncomfortable. 11. Attack from spirit hall was completely unreasonable. Why they come to test him, pope like him after all. 12. There is no one skill except 1st and 2nd skill. 13. In some chapters there is problem in translation. 14. Awakening of blue silver emperor bloodline. 15. He took a unknown girl (black vailed women) as his lover in slaughter city but rejected hu liena, how is she better than her. 16. Sudden second marital soul.

What's with this trash novel.....lacky of Shrek?

Flawed points.... 1. His martial soul....it's illogical how two beast martial soul becomes a tool type and even so what's with the great sword 2. His character, i don't like it with full of human supermacy. 3. His two god king position without twin maritial soul. 4. Qian xunji, that beats didn't die. Author trying to say that her being raped was her own fault as if they don't have women they care about. Turely a masochistic thought. Tell me how is it bibi dong falut that she was raped. She was naive so she fall for wrong person apby separating her she would forget about him but he raped her. I think he brought her up with sole purpose of carrying his child, so child have supreme talent. This author who says he raped her because he loved her or he raped her because she wanted to betray spirit hall is complete bullshit. He had always seen her as his property once this property showmthe sign of going out of control, he got anxious and raped her. 5. Why is there no destruction godking and life godking. 6. No remorse in mascaring soul beasts. 7. His subordinates only care about merit. And it is too much emphasis on subordinate as it becomes annoying. 8. How two god kings are not suprise by his knowledge.... There was an another novel similar to it where MC was bibi dong son but he didn't save the qian xunji and in that novel relationship between qian xunji and MC was very deep but he didn't interfere....he choose justice over mysocism, false fatherhood etc. it truely disappointed me. He said he has no right to tell anyone to let go of his harate but he still choose his father after all, he is complete hypocrite, why not let some rape your lover then ask her to forgive the rapist and she was not some else but your mother..... i don't these type of chinese authors why are piece of s*it. I would have read till end if only.....he didn't support rapist.

Flawed point.. 1. Unreasonable presences of 10,000 year old dark evil god tiger. And it also has a family for whom he is trying to protect with his life. Complete bullshit. 2. His reason for participating is to temper himself in battle but didn't he already transmigrated so he should have considerable experience and even if we ignore this then tempering method should be done just by traveling, why participate in matches of world wide competition for tempering, this reason seem very far-fetched. 3. How easily make liu erlong give up.....she didn't even confirm his words, so what was her wait of 10 years. 4. It's not actually a flaw but I just feel every party just want to kill or recruit him, that's why soul land is not to my liking as it's most dengerous for geniuses everyone want to make them son in law or ghost. Only by son of Destiny level luck can save you. 5. Talk with bibi dong was a complete blunder, even if pope is moved, why didn't she asked why he knew so many secrets and we all forgot about rakshaha god test, in this test her mental stability is not ok, so why was she so rational well let's not talk about this as author might have mark some changes. 6. Openly sharing the opportunity of immortal herb by establishing a sect, even if he don't care because of your guan but it still diplease me, can he protect him from 99 or 98 or 97 level title douluo. I generally don't like sect devlopment style. 7. Making tang san party an unkilable cockroaches like giving him second external soul bone, two women with monstrous talent, blue silver emperor bloodline awekning and 100 thousand soul bone of blue silver emperor etc. Tang san is even more powerful than original one. 8. Chad MC addicted to cigarette. Most important it's boring...harem is not handled well.

Not my type....i generally have bad opinion on Shrek male group because of fanfics, but I still tried to read. I generally don't like it. There is a similar novel where MC is ma hongjun with transmigrator soul, he give his friend like dai mubai and Oscar help like immortal grass, it was ok as he too get all beauties of Shrek. But he was too good to flander he gave him soul bones, immortal grass and even liu erlong , this simp get everything without doing anything even though he was his teacher but he is not real ma hongjun after all, so just soul bone would do, he even has give women to him, what undeserving loser. Liu erlong is best when in harem or villain or forgotten not woman of friend.... similar things happen in this too as he was matchmaker of Oscar and ma hongjun....in short i dislike MC with cupid behaviour. And dugu yan was forgotten. And after gu yuena it becomes even more unbearable.

I would have given it 5 stars if only author was not mysoginstic by line like her being raped was her own fault, even her being raped is not enough for her crime....some how that beast action is glorified and justified. Author, I wonder if you mother or sister have made any mistake, please send them to me i will also 'punish' them. Maybe you could also 'punish' them because raped by only a single man is not enough you mother and sister should raped by whole community then their mistakes will ammend. Seriously loving is a worng person not not the victim fault, if you raped no matter what reason then you lost the right to judge because you are criminal, what was flaut of bibi dong just because she was naive, how can you say qian xunji was innocent and how can you say he really treat her as daughter not as child bride, why didn't he let her out and she the world. Who says he was not worried about his vessel for his child to have some emotions so it trapped her in spirit hall......your male domination is wrong very wrong....rape no matter what is never a good thing or justifiable. You don't know how a rape victim feel, they lose not only their innocence but also their dignity, their pride. Farewell. Now let's talk about novel itself....it's unique novel where tang san and people related to him toyed quite ruthlessly. It was a funny novel. 🤣 Well let's see what will happen If only flander that simp didn't get liu erlong.....well whatever.....it is ok but I got bored somehow maybe it wasn't my type. Note reviewer below me.....i also know bibi dong wasn't raped or i would have report this novel.....i am angry because author created a special character where he said about his work in which he stated that her being raped was her own fault and even after being raped for her mistakes or crimes is not enough....is this a human things to say....

Copy of tang san....i was quite excited at first as i always want a MC similar to tang san with blue silver emperor and haotian hammer, but blue silver on life system and haotian hammer with destruction system. This type of MC is only on fanfic " douluo: this tang is different" where MC was tang san but his soul was of transmigrator and this was very good and rich in soul master theories and MC ability was very best. But this is another copy of tang san, the poison man just with difference that soul ring of plant instead of beast but blue silver entanglement skill and poison is eternal, it truely disappointed me. His other soul is also copy of heavy haotian hammer i.e. great sword. But this guy is not only copy but also replace tang san.... In short it is a lazy writing like childish reasons, big plot holes, too much water with only saying no showing, dialogues are too awkward. Why didn't tang hao stopped xiao wu (even if he is good person but even good person won't leave 100000 rings here tang hao villain), why he traveled around like walking treasure trove like blue silver grass with such high cultivation speed, 2nd thousands years old spirit rings and most important their age but they never encountered any danger, as soul land is most unfriendly to genius compare to other novels worlds. His target of life is also trash, kill tang hao kill ju douluo, but what next? And reason for hatred was his parents somehow come into cross fire of right between tang hao and pope with his lackey.

It's ok... especially at first. But still it was good. Author did use emotions properly. It just there are too many women and quality of women douluo dalu 3 is not good as 1 and 2 except gu yuena (my personal view) but author didnt even invest time on her. 6-7 would be good he pick up everything he got whether they had husband or past relationships....like yali and yun ming author do too unfair to their characters, they were definitely not like this and there was no reason for yali to be in harem, you could give that time some other characters who didn't get much screen time like yuahn yuhai etc because yali and yun ming were the character I liked in original novel so just feel uncomfortable as their loving relationship broken and it also makes me uncomfortable as their relationship still existed unlike other milf characters and demon emperor who has been mad for 20000 years just to avenge her husband suddenly fall for him at least take some time

I have read it's orginal version. Every is good, it is a funny novel. But it's slightly watery and yeah filled with top many plot holes....but still it's enjoyable. He is using diary to deceive heroines which is quite rare. I just hope his second martial be strong or unique like golden dragon King or dragon god, as ice and fire dragon king is quite common because of ice and fire, dark devil evil tiger is strong but not strongest, blue silver emperor is also her situation is similar to devil tiger.....so either unique weapon or power dragon clan....ice and fire really to common. Reason for 4 star not 5 star is simple, because I don't like author mentality....he justify qian xunji rape action in few paragraphs...it's good he didn't expand it more or I might have given one star. And people below who are cursing author for adding bibi dong and ah yin..feel like virgin obsessed or should I call them insel....well back to topic....these people will not say a word or even enjoy when author justify or glorify rape. But they have nerve to curse at author or MC for adding milf in harem.

Quite ok... topic of luck fascinate me....but other things repulced me...like evil technique, self harming technique, self centred, centipede...not my type