This novel okay,.. It's full of extra monologue and author trys to explain every single thing again and again. It's Naruto fan fiction and whoever is reading it has general idea about the Naruto I don't understand why author forgot this. Only after 350+ chapters it gets a bit better.

Story some times flows at slow pace and ends up with fast pace ending. For example protagonist has uneven power at start then beats up enemy in one move to finish. Specially in Naruto chapters