Only read to chapter 2 and already see flaws. MC had the reward for cultivating QI, yet he did not use it before he go on competition stage. He know full well to compete on stage, he require significant strength, which mean he need to consume that Qi reward right away to gain all the advantage he can get to compete. Yet, here it is, he got on stage and did not consume Qi reward and show his stupidity weakness side in front of everyone. Onely to show real power after consume Qi in front of everyone. This is not something any normal human being would do, regardless of a person in novel or real life. It is simply a stupidity to go up and compete without being 100% prepared. To compete is to complete the mission which on this stage(his weakness) he would want to gain all the advantage he've had before the fight. Anyone would do that, normal human would all do that. Yet, in this novel, for MC to be heaven level underdog, MC stupid enough not to complete all preperation to be as strongest as he can be before the fight. The writer is forcing the narative, trying to make MC underdog and fight. Only to show his power later. So stupid. I got a feeling that this novel will have a lot of nonsense like this one. Forcing the narative, forcing the story line to go one direction without a good common logic to back it up, make this novel sucks big time. What a waste, it could've been good. Pity.

At the start already wrong resulted in the rest of the novel from that point wrong. Ok, original owner of the body stupid and thinking about nothing else but below the belt. But that obsession was to total influence MC who take over the body to the point that he can't make a smart move like retreat? Whats the point then? The original owner is forcing MC to die just like him, no retreat and get stronger and come back. Just stupidly stand against the strong with no strength and just to die? If I were MC, I'm not going to fight the enemy, I will fight with the owner find way to kill him completely, either that or we completely disappear from the world. I won't allow stupidity to rule my life. Especially the one who decide to do thing according to his below the belt thinking. If he is so horny just go to the whore joint to releif. Can't blindly go against the strong with nothing. That is death seeking. And death seeking just because he think below the belt, that is the worst kind of stupidity. I won't get myself into that mess. At worst, I will find way to completely annialate the original owner spirits or completely dissappear from the world together with this owner. I will not take part on that stupidity sh*t. Too low, die at such way better to kill oneself and don't bring shame. Bad start make me feel the rest of this novel sucks.

I read to 5 chapter, there was very little training during these 5 chapters. A lot of ineraction between MC and other. Lots of talking with teacher, lot of talking with his sister, his father. A lot of talking about changing in world energy. But very few words about MC training progress. In fact during 5 chapter, I only saw the mentioning of system and progress panel once. After that, a lot of talking about all kind of things. But very very few about MC training, system, and his progress. During initial stages of this novel while MC is vey weak, novel do not talk about MC training, getting stronger and so on, make me feel very wierd. Perhaps this novel focus on day to day life so much and ignore or neclect the martial art completely? Don't know. But I fee something not right for this novel style, so I end here.

Chapter 8. MC beat the sh*t out of the Fang young master, he was the 4th level which considered powerful amoung the youngster. Yet when people gossip about this incident, they keep referring MC as a "good for nothing". They've said it numerous time. A good for nothing beat the top notch and still being called "good for nothing"? Common man. He may be good for nothing before, but calling him that now? If I were the MC and hear this sh*t, I will surely show them who is really a good for nothing and beat the sh*t out of every one of them. The novel try to create the scene where MC is weak and underdog sh*t dispite his improvement. This is a very low attempt man. Seriously. Big flaw. If it were me who doing the gossip, I would not dare say that(good for nothing), at least respect the strong according to the novel man.

This novel fail to capture my interest within 4 chapters. So so, plain and boring. Nothing special at all, zero entertainment value.

Wierd novel. MC join the rightous path organization, but the organization actually act like a dark and villian organization. Put soul imprint to MC twice, that is something the dark side would do. Then all kind of wierd treatment, yet again, look more like a dark side would do. Then a bunch of skills that MC captured, it was so many in short period of time to the point I can't remember it and simply ignore this part which made the novel less fun. Just plain old wierd. MC got lots of skill, but he is still a small chicken(compared to all the superb skills that MC been copying). Overall, no substance at all. No fun part that would capture audiene. Just plain and very weird. bye bye

Why is it that MC cultivation level always being suppressed? He is Qi perfection state, and still continue to be at this level. Yet he already had to power to kill someone 3 major level higher than him. Isn't it better just to write that MC pregress 3 major level during this period? Why still at qi but can kill a much higher level stuff? Keep suppressing just to create a face slaping sh*t style? This is getting too old. Come up with something more creative. If MC had the power to kill a much higher level, then just write that MC cultivation pregress reach such level, stop doing the old school that MC still at qi but kill higher sh*t. Its really boring. No entertainment value to see underdog kill higher level(I've read this style for at least more than 100 of times). It is getting really old.

This novel could'be been good. But that nationalist sh*t ruin everything. I mean totally ruin everything. I want to read novel for fun, not to get into polical ideal sh*t. War between China and Japan was over 80 years ago. The people that do all the killing were all dead. Current Japan and current China, there is no victim and there is no more murderer. Get over the past already, this kind of hate from history won't do anyone any good. Only push people thinking and mindset lower and lower. Not everyone in the world are looking to kill all the Chinese. On the oposit, it is the current China that being more aggressive toward other nation. Laos, Vietnam, Phil, Taiwan, Korea, and Japan, and even Malay and Indo, also Australia are all suffer some form of aggression from China. Even the American was not spared. Don't give me the Chinese people are peaceful and will only act when provoke sh*t. If so peaceful, what the f_ck China doing occupying South China sea overlasping the territories of many other nations? Even try to control South China sea shipping lane. But too bad, China is not strong enough to do it. There are many navel power there and enough to deal with the Chinese. Chinese might be able to bully the Phil. But there are Aussie, Japan, Korea, and even Taiwan. None of those nation's navies are weak. Small number, but make up for in term of Tech. That is why the Chinese can't totally control South China Sea yet. Act all aggressive and sh*t but claim to be a very peaceful country. Who are you trying to fool. Just look at this type of novel, already show your war monger mindset. Everyone put the past behind to move forward, but the Chinese still try to use the past history to enrage their own people. Chinese are not the only one who suffer in the war OK? American suffer a great deal in many form, Aussie also, Korean, Taiwan, Malay, Vietnam, Cambodia, Laos, Phil, Butma, Infornesia, all suffer inhuman treatment from the Japanese back then. But all other nation chose to move forward.

Something is off. I can't point a finger at it. Just feeling something is a bit off about this novel. I like the plot of MC, the master, taking in student to gain power. I read many of this kind of novel. But this one, I don't know, just a bit off, can't say exactly what's not right. Anyway, I give up on this one. I can only say, this is the worst novel of it's kind that I've read so far.

If I were the MC, that old monster that hidden in the ring will have bad luck. For making MC cultivation level drop which causes him to get expelled from the school and then all the reputation ruined. When reputation ruined there will be many many problem that follows. For example his family including him will get bully and pushed over. All of that problem was just because the old monster decided to take MC power without telling him. For all that troubles, I will surely take off the ring and sealed it somewhere make sure no one will find this ring for hundreds of years or more. By then his spirits will lost all power and he will disappear. I will surely do all that becaue he take power and cultivation without consulting with MC. In otherwords, take my thing without my permission. Then the story of this novel will end early, at most 3 chapters. I hate people do not respect other's people properties the most. Want something? Then talk about it, ask!!!!! And negociate what will he give in retrun. This way, MC can be prepare for what will happen and find way to minimize the damage.