It started okay, but was confusing on the MC stats as it is never shown or explain by the author on how it works. We have to take the word of the MC that he is stronger than a immortal cultivator. Also, it feels like the author skips some explanation to move the story faster. If you are bored and want to have just something to read until you find a better story, okay to read this for awhile.

Good story but it is is heavily edited as paragraphs are completely missing in almost every chapter. Prime example first chapter when the author is talking about the past the paragraph explaining why he was force to retired is removed. Recommending you read this at a different website.

The concept is good, but goes somewhere else. The MC has a system but it is barely mention what the systems does, and the nationalism is to much.