one of best ever one piece fan-fic i have ever seen good job 👌😌🫡.... to be honest i guess saitama's power is more than this acc to what i seen in mangas 🤔.. well forget it anyway it fan-fic is awesome 🫶
Very good novel further more it quite good at power level judging from true god to hunyuan level 🍁.... But still 1 star rated cause your unspecable racism atleast show some lenient toward it but no got to be kidding about racism even in a novel 😒.. So it deserve 1 star...
it's very good novel 👌🫶... it's just don't have to many chapters but direction of writing is very well of .... sigh, what a pity that you could make this fan-fic a bit more long like around 300+ chapter then it would be great fan-fic for readers ...😌
very good fan-fic 👌.. It have new creations not like getting board on luffy's ship as a creawmate. although some character like nami, franky, robin, hancock etc are one with luffy but thansfered to luote but still it have a rather full of surprised journey.. So it weilds 5stars review but i'm little upset about that it can become one of mine most favoured fan-fic of one piece but couldn't cause of some factors like few more your own creations & imaginations 🫡.. but still it have the qualification of 4 stars so i gave it thank you for your great contribution on my entartainment 🫡🫡😌😌
To be honest 2 star reaction beacause of your hard and 1 star because of your work .. try to add something exiciting in next novel all i see in every Douluo dalu novel is same plot no additional creation 😑😑
This novel have a lot of potential, especially for fans who are already invested in the Douluo universe. It’s clear the author is passionate about the world and has a strong imagination. However, the pacing, power balance, and character depth need refinement for it to truly stand alongside the original works or other high-quality fan expansions.
If you're looking for an action-packed, alternate take on the Douluo Continent and are willing to forgive some rough edges, this story might still be worth your time. For me, it was a fun but flawed read that left me both entertained and a little frustrated. 😌