the story is interesting but there are a couple of things that need to be fix like Konoha year 46 you probably meant 36 because if the third ninja war started on the day Naruto was born it would not make much sense so fix those little things an it will be good. ps pls keep going i like the story.

good writing but after chapter 154+ its a reading mess pls fix it as soon as possible thanks keep doing a good job love the novel.