Yes, brother I like this fanfic why became disciple ,,,,when mc really don't need master like universe master level power ,,,, because after accepting master like chaos city leader some times latter mc became universe master what the fu...ck my question than why accept or became disciple when I have cheat like beyond god king level......

Swallowed star fanfic a major problem in universe master accept disciple.....mc have op cheat why accept other master....now if you chose Lou feng problem chaos city leader guide him creating skill or ECT but fanfic mc doesn't need any thing that require him accept master or something...lolll like marvel fanfiction ancient one like omnipotent behavior where she need time stone to see future and time stone like big boss other infinite stone like trash,,,,fuc kkkk man I am disgusted that much with this type fu cking author writing........

Why only Pidgey...I mean are you going to give mc wind god hood in douluo.... I just don't understand..... why one Wuhan....not 2 like tang san

What a waste...lol shrouding the haven saint king is powerful than swallowed star immortal.... it's a huge joke....at least I know..... what a waste......now some milk brat may be thinking shrouding the haven immortal king is powerful than swallowed star universe lord....and why because shrouding the haven immortal king can go past but swallowed star universe lord only can do time reverse....not go past or .....lol.... If author show shrouding the haven immortal=shrouding the haven immortal than at least its ok but saint king it's really hurt my weak heart......

Hahaha holding the sun and the moon in my hands,, picking up the stars, there are no one like me in the world but I like this fanfic I don't know why.... 😂

Mc behave like Karma taj dog...I understand gu Yi have time stone but it doesn't mean she is omnipotent know everything.....then with mind stone you can be also omnipotent..... remember infinity stone powerful but somewhere they used like ordinary stone..and mc time traveling if caught by some one then TVA brothers come first then gu Yi....some fan fic writer writing like showing(in marvel) ancient one big boss know everything omnipotent like licking dog... when One above all,, living tribunal,,,, five creation god,,,,and dimension demon like ant where ancient one is borrowing magic power from a dimension demon to cast spell.....as I said gu Yi like mortal without borrowing magic power if hulk can land a punch we don't know where to find body of gu Yi ....I love reading fan fic but facing this type fan fic 😡😡....

Please 🙏🙏 write another novel...