It was good until the youngest Aunt started going crazy. Her actions could have caused some serious consequences and after a pathetic excuse of an apology she glazed past the issue. His family had parts I liked and parts I hated but it got to a point where the Aunts actions should have been unforgivable. It was good until that point and if it doesn’t bother you it’s fine but I cannot continue to read as the mc is so pathetic around his family.
Starts really good but has problem opposite most of these story types. Normally the problem is that they are to busy suppressing themselves. This ones problem is that they are too united it’s not believable. There’s not enough chaos and fear given their situation. The MC is too giving to random people. It’s the best way I can put it
The MC is unlikable and the Store part of the story is only a tiny part the further the story goes.
Please give me a reason to care about anything in the story. The interesting part should be selling things but it is completely ignored and when things are sold they just say how amazing the product is. I don’t care enough about the mc to care about his revenge.
It’s not bad but I hate multi MC stories. I don’t want to be concerned about these random nobodies. 1 cheat is enough more than that and it’s just annoying.
If you're going to write a monster tamer/evolution system story you should focus on that not potion making. I read 387 chapters, and he has not become an evolution master. The evolution method he is using is so stupid, increase the quality and give them 10 times more than needed and that somehow causes super evolution.
At the current chapter other counties are showing up and they are blood thirsty jerks. The author isn't giving them the usual fake names (Eagle, Bear, Sakura, ect) and just calling them real world countries, These stories always turn into slop once nonfictional countries are added.
Ugh. Mc is a whiny nobody who got the great fortune of receiving a system and constantly complains. The lottery is the beginning of the end. The lottery is the worst, the store is abandoned and it is turned into a story about making everyone gambling addicts.