good its dropped. I see face slapping everywhere. what kind of steadiness is this? they fight everywhere and show off everywhere. and, finishing off the opponent in one move due to being afraid that they could fight and lose in the end is fine, but you kill the saint in one move? if you want to hide, hide such that you fight a long prolonged battle and win arduously. you should kill those protagonists in one move, since they have the luck to escape. you should not do your best on every random battle and show of all your power. what kind of hiding is that? I mean, I got so many things to say that I better now say.

teenager-level. grammer is appropriate, but plot is like a drama. you got a all around plot, but its use is most basic. also, is the mc really reincarnated? cause he is more wuxia than the ancient.??

its a good novel, but its very rushed. Like, it had huge potential that could be made richer with more research and giving more details, but by rushing the storyline there's a disharmony. Most of the plot holes were made by rushing the storyline. also, you could have written the mc in a more mysterious way, and mystical way, rather than showing him like a manipulator, more like a, I became a dao ancestor by accident, like. other than that, the realms are not made thoroughly. I was not able to compare it properly and eventually I totally just forgot it. that is one of the major mistakes. the only thing we know is that we are op. But, this is still a classic LN with good storyline, and its enjoyable to read. having a good ending to the story is better than most LNs out there.

Well written. Light reading stuff. The maths make sense. The plot has some holes, but in the end it makes sense. The ending was rushed. It has good potential, but I still congratulate the author for being able to write a good and complete novel.

a top tier novel. must read. in fact, I would like to know the names of similar novels, and this has a lasting memory on me. Please give it a try and see. Besides, I love what he did with the rules for development and all that, as it totally made sense. and also, did you notice that it was the worlds will (earth) that rewarded only xia people, while the universe will rewarded the entire planet. that was a little detail that I liked very much. the only defect in this is that he is the only one who is op. the remaining are all mediocre. I still hope other characters would help him. I would suggest the author slow down the plot, and write other character's stories too, not just focus on the protagonist. its like, I want to know how the people on earth are doing, their daily life and pursuits, etc. like, how the society on earth is .. like that. the only thing I know right now is that mc gave infinite resources to earth. Also, there is only one tower of babel in that space. only one tower and only a couple of ranking for the entire universe. its like,.. too little, right? there are various things that are like this, and these are underutilized. I hope author will write them too and do not rush to finish the story. Also, there was indeed too much nationalism and other things in the beginning that would cause dissatisfaction. but while reading, I automatically ignored it, and after earth completely belonged to him, that's when the novel truly starts. that's when it becomes an epic story.

Every plot seems extremely stupid. The plot is mechanical and plastic. It makes no sense. The mc is idiotic. Also, the characters have no life in them. They seem like npc s running a plot on a rainy day. A simple way to explain this is a western magic fantasy serial. A drama.

Good novel. Focus on story itself. All characters feel alive and the novel makes sense, in terms of mathematics and rules and all. The power levels are slightly confusing, but they are based on dng so they have a good basis. The only thing is mc isn't overly op. Like, the focus is more on the plot in terms of 1st pov by mc, but not on mc himself. Therefore, mc is always on the weak side. But love the story. Encourage people to read this

too damn irritating

the world pushes you to learn martial arts??? always under life threatening danger, etc.

its a good time pass family- heartwarming type novel. though it gets boring soon. I feel the game side is unbearable though, its like a mix of everything. the only thing worth reading here is the family genre part.