This is really written well. Sometimes, I forget that it is a marvel fanfiction instead of an urban novel.

Annoying side comments. Confusing. Author does not know where to take his story.

Please remove the romance tags in this. This is a harem-seeking protagonist. The story is almost ruined because the author tried too much writing some comedy stuffs.

Unsafe for consumption.

Got boring pretty fast when all the techniques in the world is in his hands.

Terrible.

This needs to be thrown into the trash bin.