It is well narrated and quite clear storyline but needs more chapter

I would like to see more rap scene from america less violence more real incident real from early 20

I think it is good one but the Cultivation level should be more clear

I meam its kinda boring at middle and last the author should add less submissive personality and make system as auxiliary medium not an life sucking one. And there must be little gap from war and developing inside nation and propaganda things

It needs to focus more on teacher- disciple flow then more children more blessings type flow

This is quite good but later it is mostly about the inheritance which i guess is either by his future self or any unfortunate cultivator