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Reincarnated as the Primarch of the lost Eleventh Legion, the protagonist finds himself facing an erased destiny.

Chosen by the source realm known as the Kingdom of Disorder, Ning Lu’s fate is rewritten from the very moment he awakens in the gene-lab gestation pod. With the power of mysticism and alchemy, he delivers a startling blow to the four Chaos Gods.

During the Great Crusade, he expands the frontiers of the Imperium. In the Horus Heresy, he personally executes traitor Primarchs.

After the Emperor is bound to the Golden Throne, he becomes the last active Primarch—constantly rushing between war zones to extinguish fires across the galaxy.

In the War of the Beast, he slays the Beast itself.

During the Long War, he strikes terror into the hearts of traitors and heretics.

All praise his unwavering loyalty. But… is that the whole truth?

“I'm just taking advantage of the situation. What? You didn’t notice?

With the right alchemical ingredients, I can cultivate Beyonders.

Belisarius Cawl? He’s just my ‘mentor’…”

“I am the shadow of Order, exploiting every loophole hidden within the rules.”

He is The Black Emperor—a being who rewrites the laws of reality, forges a new Imperium, and opens a future of hope amid the darkness for all of humanity.

[Keywords: Warhammer + Primarch OC + Original Legion + Lord of the Mysteries + Potion Pathways / Sequences]

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Read 49Ch. #49
An attempt to create a standard template in the form of a cheat for lords in everyday life looks interesting. But if in novels about lords you can play with the plot as you want, then in the modern world the genre of everyday life is a cheat and the meaning of the whole novel is quickly dying. If the initial chapters can be read with curiosity, how will the author beat this cheat?! Then with each new chapter, the plot recedes into the background, and you read the same thing over and over again. The main character has received information that will help him earn money, he earns this money, gets information again, and so on in a circle.  The author tried to dilute the monotony and boredom with comedic episodes, but, frankly, it was too boring for that.  At first glance, it looks like a promising novel, but the whole structure becomes clear already in chapter 5, then there is a repetition of the same thing. 
Read 257Ch. #251
Not bad, but the author couldn't prescribe a cheat, there's very little of it. The plot is sometimes very boring, the pace of the narrative is ragged, which is sometimes very fast, 5-6 events in a few lines, sometimes the whole chapter is about some kind of nonsense. In general, it's not bad, but it's immediately clear that the novel was written on the go, without plans, drafts and other things. There is no open racism like in ordinary Chinese novels, although what kind of China is it if it is a Western fantasy world?.. I thought until I read to the moment with magicians, and that Chinese characters turn out to be the magical language from which magicians cast their spells, I almost fell off my chair in This moment, lol. There is every chance of events developing where the entire noble class will eventually turn out to be rude foreign barbarians, and the magicians are wise Chinese! (Let's see if the author has the balls to abandon this path under the pressure of the site and the editors.)
Read 18Ch. #18
It has drawbacks: foreigners are bad, only the Chinese are good, and so on. But this is already an order from the state, there is no way without it. But this is one of the best in its genre (multiple "loot/reward"). He is very dynamic, balanced in terms of retaining the reader's interest, both with the plot and development, but also does not forget about the main feature, the cheat of the main character.
Read 15Ch. #15
It's a good fanfiction where MC becomes a raven who can travel in the world of movies and anime, but he needs a main character who can change the canon in the worlds he visits, and he chooses the Emperor in this role. The emperor travels with raven, changes the canon in different worlds and receives various rewards for this, in most cases it is technological knowledge. With their help, he abandons the Web and successfully captures the Milky Way Galaxy. But already in the later chapters, Raven turns into a babysitter for the Primarchs, he makes sure that they do not betray and start heresy. Good and funny humor, not Chinese bullshit, as usual, which is unexpected, more or less good story arcs in other worlds.  But it's the choice of other worlds that I don't like, it's either Chinese stuff, or anime, or an anime game, which breaks logic and motivation to read. It works as humor, of course, but it's all very cringe-worthy. For example, the moment when the Emperor destroyed the United States in the world of the "Three-body Problem" in 15 days, but then he started a war to unite the planet, quickly capturing and destroying those who refused to join the Imperium, but then met China and instead of capturing it suddenly goes to negotiations. China cites many conditions, such as autonomy and the right to withdraw from the Imperium if they want to. And the Emperor agrees to everything! And immediately after that, he starts aggressively seizing the remaining countries and alliances again.  Well, you understand, if this is China, then logic is dying.
Read 63Ch. #63
It's too long (fillers), the pace of the narration is very slow, and the routine here seems very strange, especially when the MC has a cheat in the form of a strategic system from a war game. Instead of the expected wars and battles, the author writes about how MC plays with his cat. It seems that the author is really a beginner, and he did not have any preliminary preparation of the structure of his entire book, and he began to write about everything that came to mind, in the end it turned out to be uninteresting and tedious to read.
Read 15Ch. #15
Logic is missing here because it's a fucking xianxia. The same cultivation, the same meditations.  The MC passes a test for memorization and assimilation of knowledge, but everything is done in the Xianxia style, where you take a step forward when you have mastered one piece of knowledge. But no specifics, not a word about what kind of knowledge it is! And even at the end of this trial, the author gave out nonsense, and the whole story officially turned into xianxia, when the MC visualizes the solar system, damn it. With the words: "Each planet or celestial body is responsible for one area of science."  And immediately after this pointless and useless test, the author sent the MC back to his village and no longer writes "village", but some kind of "Wang".  Also, according to the laws of stupid cultivators, he fatally offended another person when he just fucking passed the test, behaving like an adequate person, no sidelong glances, no offensive gestures and intentions, but the author gave him a deadly opponent. In general, everything is clear, a fake novel about a Lord who is actually an idiotic Xianxia.
Read 23Ch. #23
I spent more than 2 hours making this fanfiction more or less readable. My God, the Chinese distorted everything: first names, last names, and also came up with different nicknames for characters and alien heroes. Overall, it's not a bad fanfiction, although only 16 chapters have been read (2 hours of editing Chinese shit for you guys), but overall the fanfiction follows the plot of the original. The only difference is the participation of the presenter and his more powerful watch, Nemetrix.  I do not know what will happen next, but I hope that will not turn everything into a fucking xianxia with the Monkey King. edit 20 chapters of this Chinese madness started killing me, then without me, guys, I watched the cartoon in ancient times and I don't remember the details, but gpt is very stupid and says that this is probably an alternative timeline created by the author of the fanfiction, even for the original events! Well, I gradually started to remember the original and corrected what I remembered, but that's it, I'm tired of this Chinese shit adaptation, damn, even Dr. Paradox is that they adapted like Mao Dong. 🤣 +5 social credit for mentioning Mao Zedong!
Read 20Ch. #47
A genre where an MC travels to different worlds and solves problems there, and gets rewarded for it.  The novel is below average, too stupid, too naive, and a clickbait description. I decided to read a novel because it's mostly a movie dungeon, not a fucking anime. I've read more than 40 chapters, but the author only writes about Chinese films that nobody fucking needs, while in the description he mentioned classics of Western cinema.  The MC here is also incredibly dumb, he wants to act secretive, but then he goes through the dungeon with his roommates, and they are quickly found out, forcing them to reveal themselves. Dumb solutions to create conflicts and enemies, cliched characters, meaningless dialogues, uninteresting plot, illogical world, everything is bad.
Read 17Ch. #17
A standard novel from the conveyor, nothing special, everything is standard. Although I laughed at the setting of the main character in the form of an orphan with a 100 million fortune! Seriously, was the author drugged when he wrote about the biography of the main character? I guess that the author made such a stupid move so that the MC would not steal at the very beginning, while there is still order. But because of this, the whole storyline with workplace conflicts, love interest, and others doesn't make sense. MC did not receive this 100 million inheritance SUDDENLY from an uncle who died in the USA, it was left by his rich parents who lived in a villa! At the same time, the author emphasizes that MC drives a Chinese car, goes to work, and behaves modestly! Complete nonsense, most likely, the author got a slap on the head from the editor or censorship and urgently changed the beginning and biography of the MC from criminal to what we have now, while not paying attention to the subsequent plot and the logic of the narrative.
Read 62Ch. #63
Not bad for his genre, the main character is not an idiot or a moron, he behaves more or less adequately.  The plot is also befitting the genre: almost none, in terms of survival everything is standard, in terms of cheat it is interesting, in general it is not bad, you can read. Among the disadvantages, I can single out anime logic with cat girls and censorship.