Well written but to bland. No humor. No human relations, no warmth, it's dark, not too much but still due to the absence of above elements the darkness exaggerats. Honestly I would give max 3 points because of this website. Truthfully 2.5 points are enough.
For me, with experience of reading 1000 + novels, I found this novel very good.
Why because it is relaxed and thankfully more humane and for a sane mind it is mind blowing with it's world building. I can't wait for the ultimate truth of Luo Feng verse. Luo Feng has suffered a lot in ST 1 and in 2 he deserves a relaxed mindset as he has been through a lot. His morality and conduct also positive. Some ill barain may don't like it and it's their problem. The way another took the plot is interesting and somewhat unique. For example in almost all novels where revival is possible the revival usually occures at the end of the novel and all live happily but here Luo Feng revived almost all past figures in the middle of the novel. For me it was a different angle to see the plot . I do find some conceptual problems like lord Xu seeing future etc. It is more like knowing all possible outcomes. Certainly he get information from the future in advance. And when future becomes reality he immediately knows it. A good thought provoking aspect.
I would like to see some romance and heart warming scenes.
The power system is grand and level of living beings at top is massive. Time frame is also very relative. For lord's doing somethings can pass epochs and for for lower level being 1 epoch is almost eternity.
All in all a great novel.
Suggestions :
Author should mention and give time to some ST 1 side characters and their daily lives. Like lover of king zheran the monkey king, the beautiful charming girl along with team that ventured into extraterrestrial battlefield. Etc.
Don't be mislead by title and description (synopsis) of the novel. It is not brain dead but brain darain and weigh heavy on Working brains.
It is true crap. For example: his blood spilles become " his supreme blood spills ". Too much glammer and stupid sentences like when protagonist was about to neutralize a person. It was written that he has the demoner of the king. Do people look at someone's demoner at such incidents ?
>>> The novel is cheap fanfic of shrouding the heavens. There is an existing forbidden zone and an immortal path. Author just create zhetian characters like ruthless, void, ji family, wushi etc. Original point of novel that this is a world where humans are suppressed and kept at living stock is true but in context of zhetian. Otherwise this intro is totally wrong.
>>> All characters are brain dead. When MC creates a situation then all antagonist becomes hell bent on saying that human race never producea an emperor and then got face slap and perish. It is repeated occurrence.
>>> Human race did nothing for themselves except for getting shocked. MC motivated the human race and removed their disappointment but the most humans did was to create temples of MC. Total waste.
All in all the novel is bad.
Having read many novels I assure the comment reader that the novel is good. Preety good actually.
A few minus points are. ,(Personal opinion)
1.Lack of slice of life element in reality.
2. Continues simulation. The should be light hearted break in between.
3. No romance. Alas
What can I say? The novel is good—unique mix of cultivation, mystery, and parallel worlds—but also confusing and a bit creepy. The author dives deep into time, loops, and paradoxes, but made mistakes and rushed the ending. I'd rate it 3.2/5.
World Construct:
There are multiple timelines of the same world and one true "Primordial Land" above them all. (Maybe there is a higher realm from where destiny belonged). Residents in primordial land can travel to any time or world but usually don’t. There's also reincarnation, simulation, and layered realities, but it's hard to fully grasp.
Villain – Fate/Destiny:
Surprisingly, the villain is Destiny—but he’s not evil. He gave the MC everything: simulator, opportunities, allies, motivation—literally built him. Why? Destiny was an outsider, somehow received a simulator and got trapped in his simulated reality (yinfeng's reality). After cultivating the Dao of Fate, he became so powerful he couldn't die or escape. So, he created the simulator to raise someone (MC) strong enough to reach the Eternal realm and kill him—freeing him. In the final chapter, this plan succeeds. Destiny dies, simulation ends for destiny, and he returns to his true reality.
Open Questions/Conjecture:
Why MC was chosen? "door" his mother prohibited mc sister to approach? Where did the MC go after defeating Destiny?
My theory: After winning, MC returns to Earth with his real family, starting a new era. The Earth scene—where his family disappears—shows them being sent to Green Hill City (start of the novel), creating a loop. Maybe MC chose himself all along. Just like the paradox: “I gave my grandfather a coin I got from him—where did it come from?” The novel thrives on such loops.
Warning: creepy bimbo brainless maid. 🤮. Damn you author.🖕
It’s a novel I wish to forget. It twisted my brain and made me sick.
Hidden gem. After reading the whole novel. I declare that it is one of the best for fun reading. It is light, funny, world exploration, cultivation, tech. Also it doesn't burden Brian.
Let me tell all. I love Bai Fu character. FubFu is great.
Guys I highly recommend it and I have read at least 1500+ novels of all kind. It is a masterpiece for light reading. Very enjoyable.
Must try it. At least read first 20 chapters.
Again So Good..
Julh 2025. Today I suddenly remembered this novel after a long time. I came back and saw my review. This novel touched me deeply because in difficult life it was a slice of life, peace 🕊️ giving piece of art. I loved it and I still love it.
Here are few underrated hidden gems.
1. Jade lazy fairy. ( Wuxiabox.com)
2. I reached Mahayana so came the system. ( This one is a bit serious but set a good moral direction in xinxia category)
3. Just after crossing over: I was forced to bind to the system of wanting my child to become a dragon. It just recently got completed and I in real sense of the world felt sad. Not because it was too good, I skipped last student training and only focused on events in which full moon (FL) participated, I missed it because the novel especially full moon was a spring breeze.
Jade lazy fairy was dream coming true. I even translated a few chapters in my local language and told people around me about it. 2nd Mahayana novel was eye opener.
PS. Guys it's not like these are the best novels. I am reading Swallowed Star 2 as of now and it was written much better and was too engaging. But above 3 + Baifu are too easy on mind. These felt too good. This is something that top tier novels lack..
After reading 144 chapters. Here is the review:
At first I feel top tier providence similar vibes. I expected that protagonist would be steady and act accordingly. I also hoped that humans in novel will be realistic but the novel is a total let down.
World construct is very poor.
Too many face salpping plots.
Brainless antagonists.
Fight without any logical reason.
Distortion of human nature to extreme level.
Martial arts world is just in name. It has everything that a martial arts world should not have.
No romance. No emotions.
Protagonist is always showing off in front of certain people.
It was interesting until protagonist was somewhat steady. Later plot was repeating the same aspects like arrogance, face salpping, unnecessary fighting etc. Total let down.
Good story. Slice of life, funny and there are certain illogical aspects but it is fun to read. I recommend it. Hopefully it will update soon.
Comment update. It is getting better and better.
Negative point is inhumane treatment of the people whom Mc beat. Chapter 249-251. I don't like the treatment of the girl with opposite spiritual characteristics. FL should be humane after all she is from earth 🌍.
Except this the novel is very good.
Recommended novel: jade lazy fairy
Ok I have read the whole novel. Skipped some unnecessary content. Here is the review
Plot :
Drama, too unrealistic, plot MC is playing his enemy. MC is busy severing relationships for half of the plot (severing relationships with just his master and junior sister) This complex process takes half of the story. In later half He is just taking revenge.
Character development
No logic. Junior sister was portrayed as dumb. Too dumb. Later She realize few things. Inherently she is not bad but story forced her to make dumb decisions.
In my opinion she could be a good match with MC.
MC character development is just severing relationships.
World construct and cultivation:
Very bad, not even average.
Overall I was bored so read it but felt dissatisfied.
Such plotline tsk tsk, even dumb people won't like it